鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
Actually I don't like really it because. I feel it to wait money because one years I only buy one.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
I used to buy it but I don't like it. Because I feel disagreement.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
Well I usually spend to about 300 VMT. Buy shoes.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
Actually, I prefer fashionable shoes more than comfortable shoes because I want 2 beautiful.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 40.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.
示例: I don't really like buying shoes because I only buy a pair once a year, so I try to save money.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 35.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before, but I don't like it because the shoes often don't fit well or look different from the pictures.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 30.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về số tiền bạn chi tiêu.
示例: I usually spend about 300,000 Vietnamese Dong on a pair of shoes.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 40.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.
示例: I prefer fashionable shoes over comfortable ones because I want to look stylish.
语法
× Actually I don't like really it because.
✓ Actually, I don't really like it because.
The adverb 'really' should be placed before the verb 'like' to correctly modify it. The original sentence places 'really' incorrectly after 'like'.
× I feel it to wait money because one years I only buy one.
✓ I feel it wastes money because in one year I only buy one.
The phrase 'to wait money' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'wastes money'. Also, 'one years' should be 'one year' to match singular form.
× one years I only buy one.
✓ one year I only buy one.
The noun 'years' should be singular 'year' because it refers to a single year.
× I used to buy it but I don't like it.
✓ I used to buy shoes but I don't like them.
The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'shoes' which is plural; 'them' should be used instead.
× Because I feel disagreement.
✓ Because I disagree.
'Feel disagreement' is unnatural; the correct expression is 'I disagree'. Also, starting a sentence with 'Because' is acceptable here as a response.
× Well I usually spend to about 300 VMT.
✓ Well, I usually spend about 300 VMT.
The preposition 'to' is unnecessary and incorrect before 'about 300 VMT'.
× Buy shoes.
✓ On buying shoes.
The phrase 'Buy shoes.' is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. It should be connected properly to the previous sentence or rephrased.
× Actually, I prefer fashionable shoes more than comfortable shoes because I want 2 beautiful.
✓ Actually, I prefer fashionable shoes to comfortable shoes because I want to be beautiful.
The phrase 'prefer ... more than' is incorrect; 'prefer ... to' is correct. Also, '2 beautiful' is incorrect; it should be 'to be beautiful'.
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