鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
I like buying shoe, especially sandals and sneakers. I buy them quite often around 3:00 every three or four months. I love wearing new sneakers to the university so that make me feel more comfortable and happy.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
I have never bought shoes online, mainly because I scare that my size will not fit with the same size that posted online. So I prefer going to the department store to buy shoes and I can try it on.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
I usually spend 10,000 to 20 thousands on my shoes because I mostly buy Brandy shoes or limited shoes from high end brands like Louis Vuitton or lower way.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
As a medical student, I prefer comfortable shoes because I have to stand all days and walking a lot. Especially in operation room I have to stand for like 10 hours straight so comfortable shoes will help me maintain my physical activity.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 70.0建议: ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ เช่น ใช้ "shoes" แทน "shoe" และปรับปรุงความชัดเจนของเวลาในการซื้อรองเท้า รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลมากขึ้น
示例: I like buying shoes, especially sandals and sneakers. I usually buy them every three or four months. I love wearing new sneakers to the university because they make me feel more comfortable and happy.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 75.0建议: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น ใช้ "I am scared" แทน "I scare" และใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมูทมากขึ้น
示例: I have never bought shoes online because I am scared that the size I order might not fit. Therefore, I prefer going to the department store where I can try the shoes on before buying.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 65.0建议: ควรระบุจำนวนเงินอย่างชัดเจนและใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น "thousand" แทน "thousands" และแก้ไขคำที่สะกดผิด เช่น "Brandy" เป็น "branded" รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค
示例: I usually spend between 10,000 to 20,000 baht on my shoes because I mostly buy branded or limited edition shoes from high-end brands like Louis Vuitton or Loewe.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 80.0建议: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น ใช้ "all day" แทน "all days" และเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้สมูท
示例: As a medical student, I prefer comfortable shoes because I have to stand all day and walk a lot. For example, in the operating room, I have to stand for about 10 hours straight, so comfortable shoes help me maintain my physical activity.
语法
× I like buying shoe, especially sandals and sneakers.
✓ I like buying shoes, especially sandals and sneakers.
The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to shoes in general, not a single shoe. In English, when talking about items in general, the plural form is used.
× I buy them quite often around 3:00 every three or four months.
✓ I buy them quite often, around every three or four months.
The phrase 'around 3:00 every three or four months' is confusing and incorrect. The time '3:00' is unnecessary here. The correct expression is 'around every three or four months' to indicate frequency.
× I love wearing new sneakers to the university so that make me feel more comfortable and happy.
✓ I love wearing new sneakers to the university so that they make me feel more comfortable and happy.
The verb 'make' needs to agree with the plural subject 'they' (referring to sneakers). Also, the pronoun 'they' is necessary to clarify the subject causing the feeling.
× I have never bought shoes online, mainly because I scare that my size will not fit with the same size that posted online.
✓ I have never bought shoes online, mainly because I am scared that my size will not fit the same size posted online.
The verb 'scare' is incorrectly used. The correct form is 'I am scared' to express fear. Also, 'fit with' should be 'fit' without 'with' in this context.
× So I prefer going to the department store to buy shoes and I can try it on.
✓ So I prefer going to the department store to buy shoes so I can try them on.
The conjunction 'and' should be replaced with 'so' to show purpose. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'shoes' (plural).
× I usually spend 10,000 to 20 thousands on my shoes because I mostly buy Brandy shoes or limited shoes from high end brands like Louis Vuitton or lower way.
✓ I usually spend 10,000 to 20,000 on my shoes because I mostly buy brand-name shoes or limited shoes from high-end brands like Louis Vuitton or Loewe.
The word 'thousands' should be 'thousand' when used with numbers like '20,000'. 'Brandy' is incorrect; it should be 'brand-name'. 'Lower way' is a mishearing or misspelling of 'Loewe', a luxury brand. Also, 'high end' should be hyphenated as 'high-end'.
× As a medical student, I prefer comfortable shoes because I have to stand all days and walking a lot.
✓ As a medical student, I prefer comfortable shoes because I have to stand all day and walk a lot.
The phrase 'all days' should be 'all day' to indicate the entire day. 'Walking' should be 'walk' to maintain parallel structure with 'stand'.
× Especially in operation room I have to stand for like 10 hours straight so comfortable shoes will help me maintain my physical activity.
✓ Especially in the operating room, I have to stand for about 10 hours straight, so comfortable shoes will help me maintain my physical activity.
'Operation room' should be 'operating room' with the definite article 'the'. 'Like' is informal and should be replaced with 'about' for approximation. Commas are added for clarity.
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