鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“a shoes”应为“shoes”，“bash with often”表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: I don't buy shoes very often because I prefer to invest in high-quality pairs that last a long time. Also, as a student, I don't have much time or budget to shop frequently.

建议: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误，如“for several times”应为“several times”，句子结构不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子并避免重复。

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because there are often special offers that make the prices cheaper. I usually look for good quality shoes at a lower price.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“they they”，表达不够简洁。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达观点。

示例: I usually spend around 200 to 300 Chinese Yuan on shoes. I focus on buying durable, high-quality shoes so I don't need to replace them frequently. Price is not my main concern.

建议: 回答中断断续续，表达不清晰，缺乏连贯性和完整的句子。建议提前组织答案，避免重复和犹豫，清楚表达观点。

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them for long periods. Although fashionable shoes can attract attention, comfort is more important to me.

× I want to wear a shoes for a long time

✓ I want to wear shoes for a long time

这里的'shoes'是复数形式，前面不应该加不定冠词'a'，因为'a'只能修饰单数名词。应去掉'a'。

× I often buy shoes of high quality so I don't have the need to bash with often.

✓ I often buy shoes of high quality so I don't have the need to buy often.

句中'bash with'用法错误，应该是'buy'。另外，'bash'不是买鞋的正确动词。

× I don't have much time for me to buy a lot of shoes.

✓ I don't have much time to buy a lot of shoes.

'for me to buy'结构不正确，应该直接用不定式'to buy'表示目的。

× I have bought shoes online for several times

✓ I have bought shoes online several times

'for several times'用法错误，'several times'前不加'for'。

× it it is often the case that there is a special offer online

✓ it is often the case that there are special offers online

'special offer'应为复数形式'special offers'，因为通常有多个优惠。谓语动词也应与复数主语一致。

× I tend to buy something that is cheaper with good quality.

✓ I tend to buy something that is cheaper and of good quality.

'cheaper with good quality'搭配不当，应使用'and of good quality'来连接两个形容词短语。

× I usually spend about 200 to CN¥300 on shoes

✓ I usually spend about CN¥200 to CN¥300 on shoes

货币单位应放在数字前面，且范围表达应完整。

× I often make sure that they are very time durable.

✓ I often make sure that they are very durable.

'time durable'不是正确表达，应该直接用'durable'表示耐用。

× I mean they they have good quality so I don't have to replace them very often

✓ I mean they have good quality so I don't have to replace them very often

重复的'they'应去掉一个。

× I take not to say that I don't like fashionable shoes.

✓ I mean not to say that I don't like fashionable shoes.

'take not to say'用法错误，正确表达是'mean not to say'。

× I know that issues are to use the are used to wear and, and.

✓ I know that these shoes are comfortable to wear.

原句结构混乱，缺乏主谓宾，需重组句子使其通顺。