鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to be more direct and natural by saying how often you buy shoes clearly, and avoid unnecessary phrases like 'at a yearly way, at a yearly interval per SE'.

示例: I don't buy shoes very often; usually, I purchase a new pair once a year.

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and has grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar, for example, 'I faced difficulties when I tried to return it.'

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but it was a bad experience because the product quality did not match the description on the website. Moreover, I faced difficulties when I tried to return the shoes.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Make sure to complete your sentences and use correct verb forms. Also, explain why you spend that amount to add more detail.

示例: I usually spend around 10,000 rupees on shoes because I buy them once a year and prefer good quality and durability.

建议: Your answer is good but incomplete and slightly repetitive. Try to finish your sentences and use linking words like 'while' to contrast your preferences clearly.

示例: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. I usually wear fashionable shoes at weddings or formal events, while I choose comfortable shoes when meeting friends or going out casually.

× Well, I don't like buying shoes often, but yeah, I prefer buying shoes at a yearly way, at a yearly interval per SE.

✓ Well, I don't like buying shoes often, but yeah, I prefer buying shoes yearly, at yearly intervals.

The phrase 'at a yearly way, at a yearly interval per SE' is awkward and incorrect. The correct form is 'yearly' or 'at yearly intervals'. The error relates to incorrect use of verb forms and expressions involving time intervals, which falls under verb in the present participle form usage.

× Yes, I have bought shoes online but it was quite a bad experience as the specifications and things which were mentioned on the site didn't match the product quality and when I try to return the product I face very difficult in returning it.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online but it was quite a bad experience as the specifications and things which were mentioned on the site didn't match the product quality and when I tried to return the product I faced great difficulty in returning it.

The sentence mixes present tense 'try' and 'face' with past events. Since the experience happened in the past, the verbs should be in past tense: 'tried' and 'faced'. This is a past tense issue.

× Well I usually spends around 10,000 bucks to find a good quality and durability of the shoes because I only buy these shoes yearly so I.

✓ Well, I usually spend around 10,000 bucks to find good quality and durability in shoes because I only buy these shoes yearly.

The verb 'spends' does not agree with the singular subject 'I'. The correct form is 'spend'. Also, 'a good quality and durability of the shoes' is awkward; it should be 'good quality and durability in shoes'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× Well, I prefer both fashionable shoes and comfortable shoes. Fashionable shoes I personally prefer to wear on some occasions like marriages or some any other formal event, whereas comfortable shoes I generally wear when I have to meet some friends or.

✓ Well, I prefer both fashionable shoes and comfortable shoes. I personally prefer to wear fashionable shoes on occasions like marriages or other formal events, whereas I generally wear comfortable shoes when I meet friends.

The original sentence has awkward word order and incomplete ending. The corrected sentence improves clarity and structure by placing subjects before verbs and completing the thought. This is a sentence structure error.