鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more direct and concise. Also, avoid vague statements like "it really impacts our body". Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons or examples.

示例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they complete my outfit. For instance, a good pair of shoes can enhance my overall appearance and boost my confidence.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Use linking words like 'however' or 'for example' properly. Also, be more specific about the issues and avoid repeating the same idea.

示例: Yes, I have bought several pairs of shoes online. However, sizing can be a problem because different brands have varying size charts. Therefore, it's important to check the size guide before purchasing.

建议: Your answer has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Avoid mixing currency formats and be precise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and provide clear reasons for your spending habits.

示例: I usually spend between ₹400 and ₹2000 on shoes. Sometimes, I invest in luxury shoes because of their high quality and durability. For example, I own a pair that cost ₹50,000, which I find worth the price.

建议: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Avoid sentence fragments and provide specific reasons.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because comfort is essential when walking all day. For instance, comfortable shoes prevent foot pain and make daily activities easier.

× Yes, I have bought many pair of shoes online but unfortunately there are many issues that arises like for example the sizing issue.

✓ Yes, I have bought many pairs of shoes online but unfortunately there are many issues that arise like for example the sizing issue.

The word 'pair' should be plural 'pairs' when referring to more than one. Also, 'issues' is plural, so the verb should be 'arise' instead of 'arises' to agree in number.

× Some brands have different sizing while others have different.

✓ Some brands have different sizing while others have different sizes.

The sentence is incomplete; 'different' should be followed by a noun. Here, 'sizes' is the correct plural noun to complete the comparison.

× It varies around 400 to even 2000 sometimes as some pair of luxury shoes are really expensive and I own a ₹500,000 Expensive shoe but I really likes it quality and its durability.

✓ It varies around 400 to even 2000 sometimes as some pairs of luxury shoes are really expensive and I own a ₹500,000 expensive shoe but I really like its quality and its durability.

'Pair' should be plural 'pairs' when referring to more than one. 'Likes' should be 'like' to agree with the singular subject 'I'. Also, 'it quality' should be 'its quality' to show possession.

× I own a ₹500,000 Expensive shoe but I really likes it quality and its durability.

✓ I own a ₹500,000 expensive shoe but I really like its quality and its durability.

'Likes' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'like'. Also, 'Expensive' should not be capitalized here.

× I prefer wearing comfortable shoes over fashionable ones. As they. As comfort matters the most to me and I think shoes should be comfortable as we are walking all day.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because comfort matters the most to me and I think shoes should be comfortable as we walk all day.

The sentence 'As they.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be connected properly to the following sentence using 'because' to explain the reason. Also, 'we are walking' is better as 'we walk' for general statements.