鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'shoes or clothings or similar things' and use correct vocabulary such as 'clothing' instead of 'clothings'. Also, try to directly answer the question about how often you buy shoes, and provide a brief reason. Use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I don't buy shoes very often because I receive clothing supplies from my government job. Besides, I'm not very interested in fashion items.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'it is necessary to shoes to fit to my feet' is unclear. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I have never bought shoes online because it's important that they fit well, and it's hard to judge the exact size when shopping online. Therefore, I prefer buying shoes in physical stores.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases like 'I don't spend big money on shoes' twice. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and correct minor grammar mistakes.

示例: I usually don't spend much money on shoes since I receive them from the government. Instead, I prefer to spend more on things like electronic gadgets.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. For example, 'This shows be comfortable' is unclear. Try to use varied vocabulary and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I don't usually follow fashion trends. Comfort is my top priority when choosing footwear.

× Actually, I am not very fond of buying shoes or clothings or similar things.

✓ Actually, I am not very fond of buying shoes or clothing or similar things.

The word 'clothing' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'clothings' is incorrect. Use 'clothing' to refer to garments in general.

× Besides, I'm not very fond of fashionary items.

✓ Besides, I'm not very fond of fashion items.

The word 'fashionary' is not a correct adjective. The correct term is 'fashion' as an adjective or noun. 'Fashion items' correctly refers to items related to fashion.

× I have never bought any shoes online because it is necessary to shoes to fit to my feet and it is hard to measure the actual size of the shoes online, so I always buy shoes in actual shopping.

✓ I have never bought any shoes online because it is necessary for shoes to fit my feet, and it is hard to measure the actual size of shoes online, so I always buy shoes in physical stores.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect preposition use ('to shoes to fit to my feet'). The phrase 'necessary for shoes to fit my feet' is correct. Also, 'actual shopping' is unclear; 'physical stores' or 'in person' is more appropriate.

× I have never bought any shoes online because it is necessary to shoes to fit to my feet and it is hard to measure the actual size of the shoes online, so I always buy shoes in actual shopping.

✓ I have never bought any shoes online because it is necessary for shoes to fit my feet, and it is hard to measure the actual size of shoes online, so I always buy shoes in physical stores.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used before 'shoes' and 'fit'. The correct preposition is 'for' in 'necessary for shoes to fit my feet'. Also, 'fit to my feet' should be 'fit my feet' without 'to'.

× Usually I don't spend much money on buying shoes because I get supplies from the government for clothing and shoes and I spend a lot of money on other things such as electronic gadgets.

✓ Usually I don't spend much money on buying shoes because I get supplies from the government for clothing and shoes, and I spend a lot of money on other things such as electronic gadgets.

This sentence is mostly correct, but a comma before 'and' improves clarity. No plural or singular error here.

× So I I don't spend big money on shoes.

✓ So I don't spend much money on shoes.

The phrase 'big money' is informal and awkward here. 'Much money' is more appropriate. Also, there is a repeated 'I' which is a typographical error.

× I always try to stick to the comfortable shoes because I am a person who doesn't always follow the trends or fashions.

✓ I always try to stick to comfortable shoes because I am a person who doesn't always follow trends or fashions.

The definite article 'the' before 'comfortable shoes' is unnecessary unless referring to specific shoes. Also, 'the trends or fashions' is better as 'trends or fashions' without 'the' for general statements.

× I always prefer comfort over trends so it is my first priority.

✓ I always prefer comfort over trends, so it is my first priority.

A comma before 'so' improves sentence clarity. No pronoun error here, but punctuation is needed.

× This shows be comfortable.

✓ This shows that being comfortable is important to me.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Adding 'that being comfortable is important to me' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.