鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があり、内容もやや曖昧です。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、具体的な理由や詳細を加えると良いでしょう。例えば、購入頻度の説明を明確にし、なぜサッカーが靴への興味を引き起こしたのかを具体的に述べることが望ましいです。

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy a new pair every six months. I became interested in shoes because I started playing football in junior high school, which made me appreciate good sports shoes.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法ミスや不自然な表現が目立ちます。より自然な英語を使い、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげると、より論理的で流暢な回答になります。

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online sometimes, but honestly, I don't like it because I can't try them on first. Also, I can't see the shoes clearly, so I'm not sure if they will fit well.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。より正確な文法を使い、理由を明確に述べることが必要です。例えば、靴の品質が健康に影響する理由を具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

示例: I usually spend about ¥50,000 on shoes because I believe good quality shoes are important. Wearing comfortable and well-made shoes every day helps prevent foot problems and keeps me healthy.

建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があり、内容もやや曖昧です。より自然で明確な英語を使い、理由を具体的に述べると良いでしょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげることで、回答がより論理的になります。

示例: That's a difficult question, but I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable. Fortunately, shoe technology has improved a lot recently, so it's easier to find shoes that meet both criteria.

× I buy my shoes once half year.

✓ I buy my shoes once every half year.

The phrase 'once half year' is incorrect because it lacks a quantifier and preposition. The correct expression is 'once every half year' to indicate frequency. 'Half year' is singular and needs 'every' to specify the interval.

× The opportunity which I like shoes is football.

✓ The reason I like shoes is football.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Opportunity' is not the correct word here. The intended meaning is likely 'reason' or 'cause'. The sentence structure is incorrect and needs to be simplified for clarity.

× When I was a junior high school student, I started playing football and it makes me a big fan of shoes.

✓ When I was a junior high school student, I started playing football and it made me a big fan of shoes.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the action started in the past, 'makes' should be changed to past tense 'made' to maintain tense consistency.

× I don't like buy shoes online honestly because I can't try to put on shoes.

✓ I don't like buying shoes online honestly because I can't try on shoes.

After 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form ('buying'). Also, 'try to put on shoes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'try on shoes'. Modal verb 'can't' is used correctly here.

× Also I can't confirm the shoes on my eyes.

✓ Also, I can't confirm the shoes with my eyes.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect in this context. The correct preposition is 'with' to indicate using one's eyes to confirm or check something.

× I usually spend ¥50,000 on my shoes.

✓ I usually spend ¥50,000 on shoes.

The phrase 'my shoes' is less natural here; generally, people say 'spend money on shoes' in general, not necessarily their own shoes. However, this is a minor issue and can be acceptable.

× I think it is important to ask for the quality of shoes because we have to put on shoes every day, so it may might makes me unhealthy.

✓ I think it is important to consider the quality of shoes because we have to wear shoes every day, so poor quality may make me unhealthy.

'Ask for the quality' is incorrect; 'consider the quality' is better. 'Put on shoes' is less natural than 'wear shoes'. 'May might makes' is incorrect; only one modal verb should be used ('may'), and 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with 'may'.

× Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?

✓ Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× It's very difficult question, but I usually ask for both of them because nowadays the quality of shoes is umm, proceeding quickly.

✓ It's a very difficult question, but I usually look for both qualities because nowadays the quality of shoes is improving quickly.

The sentence has multiple issues: missing article 'a' before 'very difficult question'; 'ask for both of them' is incorrect, should be 'look for both qualities'; 'proceeding quickly' is incorrect, should be 'improving quickly'.

× So I can buy shoes which has which is fashionable and comfortable.

✓ So I can buy shoes which are fashionable and comfortable.

'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'has' or 'is'. Also, 'has which is' is redundant and incorrect.

× It's very good points now.

✓ These are very good points now.

'It's' is singular, but 'points' is plural, so 'These are' is correct. Also, 'good points' is plural, so the verb must agree.