鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
Well to be honest I seldom buy shoes because I think it's not a necessary part in my life. So I I will buy shoes unless my my old shoes is break and.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, I usually bought shoes online because I think it's very convenient and there are there are a lot of size and brands can can make can make choice for me and it's convenient to change the uncomfortable shoes online.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
Uh, personally, I spent a few money in buying shoes because, uh, I think it's not necessary in my normal life and I prefer to, uh, comfortable shoes and it's not cost much. So, umm, if it's necessary, I will, umm, bought, uh.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
To be honest, I prefer comfortable shoes because I, I always work working in daily lives and my, my work requires me to stand all the day, so comfortable shoes is very essential in my normal life. Umm, uh, in other way, uh, I think uh, I prefer to practice practic.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和词汇。
示例: I don't buy shoes very often because I only replace them when my old ones are worn out.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用正确的时态，避免重复，并用连词使句子更连贯。
示例: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because it's very convenient, and there are many sizes and brands to choose from. Also, it's easy to return shoes if they don't fit.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地表达观点。
示例: I usually spend a small amount of money on shoes because I prefer comfortable ones that are affordable. I only buy new shoes when necessary.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不完整。建议简化句子，避免重复，并清晰表达理由。
示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I have to stand all day at work, so comfort is very important to me.
语法
× So I I will buy shoes unless my my old shoes is break and.
✓ So I will buy shoes unless my old shoes are broken.
这里的主语是复数形式的“shoes”，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。另外，“break”应使用过去分词“broken”来表示状态。
× Yes, I usually bought shoes online because I think it's very convenient and there are there are a lot of size and brands can can make can make choice for me and it's convenient to change the uncomfortable shoes online.
✓ Yes, I usually buy shoes online because I think it's very convenient and there are a lot of sizes and brands to choose from, and it's convenient to exchange uncomfortable shoes online.
“usually”表示习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“buy”而非过去时“bought”。“size”应为复数“sizes”，且“make choice”表达不正确，应改为“to choose from”。“change”在此语境中应为“exchange”，表示换货。
× Uh, personally, I spent a few money in buying shoes because, uh, I think it's not necessary in my normal life and I prefer to, uh, comfortable shoes and it's not cost much.
✓ Uh, personally, I spend little money on buying shoes because, uh, I think it's not necessary in my normal life and I prefer comfortable shoes and they don't cost much.
“a few money”用法错误，money是不可数名词，应使用“little money”。“spent”应改为一般现在时“spend”，与上下文时态一致。
× So, umm, if it's necessary, I will, umm, bought, uh.
✓ So, umm, if it's necessary, I will, umm, buy, uh.
“will”后应接动词原形，不能用过去式“bought”。
× ...so comfortable shoes is very essential in my normal life.
✓ ...so comfortable shoes are very essential in my normal life.
“shoes”是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。
× I, I always work working in daily lives and my, my work requires me to stand all the day...
✓ I always work in daily life and my work requires me to stand all day...
“work working”重复且错误，应只用“work”。“daily lives”应为“daily life”。“all the day”应为“all day”。
× ...I prefer to practice practic.
✓ ...I prefer to practice.
“practic”拼写错误，应为“practice”。
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