鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
Yes, I enjoy buying shoes but I don't buy it very often, maybe around once a year or even less. I prefer buying high quality shoes and buying some invasive on some shoes that.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, I did for a couple times, but I found that it's inaccurate in size and color because the last time that I bought, they sent me a smaller size of shoes and the color was totally different from the photos. Like in the photo it's kind of cream, but when they send it to me.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
I don't really have a budget plan about that, but I prefer to in ways, uh, on high quality shoes and not too expensive. So maybe not over than 3000, but yeah, because I think I would prefer using some money for more important things.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
I will say when I was young I prefer buying fashionable and trendy shoes but as I have grown up I pay more attention on their comfort. So I would like to buy shoe buy it's comfort to avoid food pain or yeah back pain.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 60.0建议: คำตอบของคุณควรชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยหลีกเลี่ยงคำที่ไม่ถูกต้องหรือไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'invasive' และควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และสั้นกระชับมากขึ้น เช่น การบอกความถี่และเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน
示例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I only buy them about once a year because I prefer to invest in high-quality pairs that last a long time.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 65.0建议: ควรปรับปรุงโครงสร้างประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'because' และ 'for example' รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและชัดเจนมากขึ้น
示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online a few times, but I found the sizes and colors were often inaccurate. For example, the last pair I ordered was smaller than expected and the color was different from the photo, which was disappointing.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 55.0建议: ควรพูดให้ชัดเจนและหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่สมบูรณ์หรือคำพูดที่ไม่จำเป็น เช่น 'uh' และใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I prefer to spend money on high-quality shoes that are not too expensive'
示例: I don't have a strict budget, but I usually spend up to 3,000 baht on good quality shoes because I prefer to save money for more important things.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 70.0建议: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'I preferred' แทน 'I prefer' เมื่อพูดถึงอดีต และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'but now' รวมถึงแก้คำผิด เช่น 'food pain' เป็น 'foot pain'
示例: When I was young, I preferred buying fashionable and trendy shoes, but now I pay more attention to comfort to avoid foot or back pain.
语法
× I enjoy buying shoes but I don't buy it very often
✓ I enjoy buying shoes but I don't buy them very often
The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'shoes' which is plural, so 'them' should be used to agree in number.
× I prefer buying high quality shoes and buying some invasive on some shoes that.
✓ I prefer buying high quality shoes and investing in some shoes like that.
The phrase 'buying some invasive on some shoes that' is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is 'investing in some shoes like that'. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity and grammar.
× Yes, I did for a couple times
✓ Yes, I did a couple of times
The phrase 'for a couple times' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'a couple of times' to indicate frequency in past tense.
× Like in the photo it's kind of cream, but when they send it to me.
✓ Like in the photo, it's kind of cream, but when they sent it to me, it was different.
The sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb in the second clause. Also, past tense 'sent' should be used to match the past event.
× I prefer to in ways, uh, on high quality shoes and not too expensive.
✓ I prefer to spend, uh, on high quality shoes that are not too expensive.
The phrase 'prefer to in ways, uh, on' is incorrect. The correct preposition after 'prefer to' when talking about spending money is 'spend' and 'on' is used with 'spend' to indicate the object.
× So I would like to buy shoe buy it's comfort to avoid food pain or yeah back pain.
✓ So I would like to buy shoes because of their comfort to avoid foot pain or back pain.
The phrase 'buy shoe buy it's comfort' is incorrect. 'Because of their comfort' correctly explains the reason. Also, 'food pain' is a typo for 'foot pain'.
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