鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, "the more shoe I have, the the fewer opportunities" is repetitive and incorrect. Also, use plural form correctly and keep sentences concise and natural.

示例: Yes, I really like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often because the more shoes I have, the less I get to wear each pair equally.

建议: Avoid filler words like "umm" and improve clarity by using precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I have. In fact, I bought shoes online a couple of months ago, but I regretted it because the size listed online did not match the actual size, so I couldn't wear them.

建议: Avoid filler sounds like "mmm" and "umm". Also, clarify currency and correct unclear expressions like "1:00 to 2000". Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

示例: Generally, I don't spend more than 5,000 baht per year on shoes. In fact, the average price of the shoes I buy ranges from about 1,000 to 2,000 baht.

建议: Avoid filler words like "umm" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide specific reasons.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes. In the past, I wore fashionable shoes because I liked their style and trends, but recently I prioritize comfort so I can wear my shoes more often.

× I feels like the more shoe I have, the the fewer opportunities that I get to wear them equally.

✓ I feel like the more shoes I have, the fewer opportunities I get to wear them equally.

The verb 'feels' should be 'feel' to agree with the singular subject 'I' (subject-verb agreement). 'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'the the' is a typo and should be 'the'.

× In fact I just bought shoes online a couple months ago and it was a big regret because I couldn't wear it.

✓ In fact, I just bought shoes online a couple of months ago and it was a big regret because I couldn't wear them.

The phrase 'a couple months ago' should be 'a couple of months ago' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'shoes' which is plural.

× Apparently the size online and the actual site is not aligned.

✓ Apparently, the size online and the actual size are not aligned.

The word 'site' is incorrect here; it should be 'size' to refer to shoe size. Also, 'is' should be 'are' because the subject is plural ('size online' and 'actual size').

× In fact, the average price of shoe that I bought ranges from around 1:00 to 2000.

✓ In fact, the average price of shoes that I bought ranges from around 1000 to 2000.

'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to multiple items. Also, '1:00' seems to be a typo and should be '1000' to indicate price.

× But lately I prioritize more under comfort so that I can wear it very often.

✓ But lately I prioritize comfort more so that I can wear them very often.

The phrase 'prioritize more under comfort' is incorrect. It should be 'prioritize comfort more'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'shoes' which is plural.