鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
I only buy shoe once in a while because my face is quite wide from the normal people in Asia so it kind of hard to find my shoe size.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, I often buy it online because you know, like shopping there is a lot of deal that you can get cheaper on the physical store because they don't have to pay rent or the employee. So we get much better deal, better price.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
This is a normal amount, nothing too expensive. I'm just brand two well known too like Adidas or Nike and usually come around 3000 to 4000 with the discount.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
Like I said my feet is usually wide than the normal Asian people so I should be comfortable shoes because my lifestyle had to walk a lot including my work and my everyday life. So the comfortable shoe is my choice.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 60.0建议: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น เช่น ใช้คำว่า "feet" แทน "face" และปรับประโยคให้สมบูรณ์และเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น
示例: I only buy shoes once in a while because my feet are wider than most people in Asia, so it's quite hard to find my shoe size.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 65.0建议: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้คำเชื่อมและโครงสร้างประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลีกเลี่ยงคำพูดที่ไม่เป็นทางการเกินไป
示例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because there are many deals available. Online stores usually offer lower prices than physical stores since they don't have to pay rent or employees, so customers can get better deals.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 55.0建议: ควรตอบตรงประเด็นและใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจน รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดที่ไม่สมบูรณ์
示例: I usually spend a moderate amount on shoes, nothing too expensive. I prefer well-known brands like Adidas or Nike, and with discounts, the price is usually around 3000 to 4000 baht.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 60.0建议: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และลื่นไหลมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและชัดเจน
示例: As I mentioned, my feet are wider than average Asian feet, so I prefer comfortable shoes. Since I walk a lot for work and daily life, comfort is my priority when choosing shoes.
语法
× I only buy shoe once in a while because my face is quite wide from the normal people in Asia so it kind of hard to find my shoe size.
✓ I only buy shoes once in a while because my feet are quite wide compared to normal people in Asia, so it is kind of hard to find my shoe size.
The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to the general item bought multiple times. Also, 'face' is incorrect here; it should be 'feet' as shoes relate to feet. 'From the normal people' should be 'compared to normal people' to express comparison correctly. 'It kind of hard' lacks the verb 'is'. The sentence needs 'it is kind of hard'.
× I only buy shoe once in a while because my face is quite wide from the normal people in Asia so it kind of hard to find my shoe size.
✓ I only buy shoes once in a while because my feet are quite wide compared to normal people in Asia, so it is kind of hard to find my shoe size.
The phrase 'it kind of hard' misses the verb 'is' for third person singular. The correct form is 'it is kind of hard'.
× Yes, I often buy it online because you know, like shopping there is a lot of deal that you can get cheaper on the physical store because they don't have to pay rent or the employee.
✓ Yes, I often buy online because, you know, there are a lot of deals that you can get cheaper than in physical stores because they don't have to pay rent or employees.
'a lot of deal' should be plural 'a lot of deals' because 'deal' is countable and plural here. 'on the physical store' should be 'in physical stores' as 'in' is the correct preposition for stores and 'stores' should be plural. 'the employee' should be 'employees' to match plural form.
× Yes, I often buy it online because you know, like shopping there is a lot of deal that you can get cheaper on the physical store because they don't have to pay rent or the employee.
✓ Yes, I often buy online because, you know, there are a lot of deals that you can get cheaper than in physical stores because they don't have to pay rent or employees.
The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to 'the physical store'; it should be 'in' to indicate location inside stores. Also, 'cheaper on the physical store' should be 'cheaper than in physical stores' to correctly compare prices.
× Yes, I often buy it online because you know, like shopping there is a lot of deal that you can get cheaper on the physical store because they don't have to pay rent or the employee.
✓ Yes, I often buy online because, you know, there are a lot of deals that you can get cheaper than in physical stores because they don't have to pay rent or employees.
The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and unclear here; 'buy it online' should be 'buy online' because the object is general shoes, not a specific item previously mentioned.
× I'm just brand two well known too like Adidas or Nike and usually come around 3000 to 4000 with the discount.
✓ I just buy two well-known brands like Adidas or Nike, and the price usually comes around 3000 to 4000 with the discount.
'brand two well known too' is incorrect; it should be 'two well-known brands'. 'brand' should be plural 'brands' because two brands are mentioned. 'too' is misplaced and should be removed. 'come' should be 'comes' to agree with singular 'price'.
× I'm just brand two well known too like Adidas or Nike and usually come around 3000 to 4000 with the discount.
✓ I just buy two well-known brands like Adidas or Nike, and the price usually comes around 3000 to 4000 with the discount.
The verb 'come' should be 'comes' to agree with the singular subject 'price'.
× Like I said my feet is usually wide than the normal Asian people so I should be comfortable shoes because my lifestyle had to walk a lot including my work and my everyday life.
✓ Like I said, my feet are usually wider than those of normal Asian people, so I prefer comfortable shoes because my lifestyle requires a lot of walking, including at work and in my everyday life.
'my feet is' should be 'my feet are' because 'feet' is plural. 'wide than' should be 'wider than' to use the comparative form of the adjective. 'I should be comfortable shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer comfortable shoes'. 'my lifestyle had to walk a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'my lifestyle requires a lot of walking'.
× Like I said my feet is usually wide than the normal Asian people so I should be comfortable shoes because my lifestyle had to walk a lot including my work and my everyday life.
✓ Like I said, my feet are usually wider than those of normal Asian people, so I prefer comfortable shoes because my lifestyle requires a lot of walking, including at work and in my everyday life.
'the normal Asian people' should be 'those of normal Asian people' to correctly compare feet. 'comfortable shoes' is plural and should be matched with 'prefer' not 'should be'.
× Like I said my feet is usually wide than the normal Asian people so I should be comfortable shoes because my lifestyle had to walk a lot including my work and my everyday life.
✓ Like I said, my feet are usually wider than those of normal Asian people, so I prefer comfortable shoes because my lifestyle requires a lot of walking, including at work and in my everyday life.
'my lifestyle had to walk a lot' incorrectly uses past tense 'had'; it should be present tense 'requires' to match the ongoing nature of the lifestyle.
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