鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors in vocabulary and sentence structure. Try to use simple and correct words, and organize your ideas logically. For example, directly say if you like buying shoes and how often, then explain why briefly. Avoid unnecessary or incorrect words like 'swapping', 'Sooch', 'suit' for shoes, and 'world' instead of 'worn'.

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes every few months because I wear them daily and they get worn out quickly. I prefer comfortable shoes since I use them a lot.

建议: Your answer is confusing and includes irrelevant information about desserts and foods. Focus on answering the question directly. Use clear sentences and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Also, use correct grammar such as 'I usually buy shoes online' instead of 'I used to buy a shoes from online'.

示例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because I know my size well and it is more convenient. I can find good quality shoes without going to the market.

建议: Your answer is unclear and has grammar mistakes. Try to give a specific amount or proportion clearly. Also, avoid confusing phrases like 'put on the suit' when you mean shoes. Use simple sentences to explain why shoes are important to you.

示例: I usually spend about half of my shopping budget on shoes because they are important for comfort and appearance. Good shoes can improve your overall look.

建议: Your answer is mostly clear but has some grammar errors and awkward phrases like 'comfortable suit' instead of 'comfortable shoes'. Try to use linking words like 'because' properly and avoid redundancy. Also, explain briefly why comfort is important.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot and need to stay fresh and energetic throughout the day. Comfortable shoes help me do that better than fashionable ones.

× Actually, one of my favorite things to do while doing a swapping is buying a Sooch because I'm too much fascinated toward buying a suit.

✓ Actually, one of my favorite things to do while shopping is buying shoes because I'm very fascinated by buying shoes.

The word 'Sooch' is incorrect and should be 'shoes' (plural). Also, 'a suit' is incorrect here because the context is about shoes, not suits. 'Swapping' is likely a mispronunciation or misuse of 'shopping'. The sentence needs plural forms for 'shoes' and correct vocabulary.

× It's a footwear and I find I really want it comfortable.

✓ They are footwear and I find that I really want them to be comfortable.

Footwear is a collective noun and usually treated as plural when referring to multiple items. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'shoes'. Also, 'want it comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'want them to be comfortable'.

× Like we use it, uh, for our daily use and it gets world.

✓ We use them for our daily use and they get worn out.

'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural shoes. 'Gets world' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get worn out' meaning they become damaged or used over time.

× For that reason, we have to buy a new, uh, offshore.

✓ For that reason, we have to buy new ones.

'A new offshore' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'new shoes'. 'Offshore' is unrelated here. Also, 'a new' should be 'new ones' to refer to plural shoes.

× The new one get world.

✓ The new ones get worn out.

'The new one' should be 'the new ones' to match plural shoes. 'Get world' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get worn out'.

× Uh, mostly I used to buy a shoes from online because I know my size well and I find it more convenient and, uh, too much, uh, good quality while doing online shopping

✓ Uh, mostly I buy shoes online because I know my size well and I find it more convenient and the quality is good while shopping online.

'A shoes' is incorrect; 'shoes' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Used to buy' implies past habit; since the question is about current habits, 'buy' is better. 'Too much good quality' is awkward; 'the quality is good' is clearer.

× For that reason, uh, I have to go to the market and move here to there for desserts or comfortable foods.

✓ For that reason, I have to go to the market and move here and there for shoes or comfortable footwear.

'Desserts or comfortable foods' is unrelated to shoes. The intended meaning is likely 'shoes or comfortable footwear'. 'Move here to there' should be 'move here and there'.

× Well, I can able to find it, uh, on online so.

✓ Well, I am able to find them online.

'Can able to' is redundant; use 'am able to' or 'can'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural shoes. 'On online' should be 'online'.

× I usually spend my half of money of shopping and my shoes because it's very necessary to put on the suit which is literally too much comfortable, clean as well as good looking.

✓ I usually spend half of my shopping money on shoes because it's very necessary to wear shoes that are comfortable, clean, and good looking.

'My half of money of shopping and my shoes' is awkward; 'half of my shopping money on shoes' is correct. 'Put on the suit' is incorrect; it should be 'wear shoes'. 'Too much comfortable' is incorrect; 'very comfortable' is correct.

× Because shoes gives you the overall looks.

✓ Because shoes give you the overall look.

'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' not 'gives'. 'Looks' should be singular 'look' to mean appearance.

× For that reason also I used to buy a suit more often than a dress.

✓ For that reason, I also buy shoes more often than clothes.

'Buy a suit more often than a dress' is unrelated to shoes. The intended meaning is likely 'buy shoes more often than clothes'. 'Used to buy' implies past habit; present tense 'buy' fits better.

× I obviously go with a comfortable shoes because while walking and doing some work and doing some exams and for a daily life we have to wear a comfortable suit which skips of us fresh and energetic.

✓ I obviously go with comfortable shoes because while walking, working, taking exams, and in daily life, we have to wear comfortable shoes that keep us fresh and energetic.

'A comfortable shoes' is incorrect; 'shoes' is plural and does not need 'a'. 'Suit' should be 'shoes'. 'Skips of us fresh' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keep us fresh'.