鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了喜欢买鞋的原因，但语法和用词不够准确，且有些句子不连贯。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，避免语法错误，同时简化表达，使回答更自然流畅。

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes because they can change my style and boost my confidence. I usually buy shoes about four times a year when my old ones wear out. It always feels great to get new shoes.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议加强动词时态和单复数的正确使用，避免重复和冗余，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I buy shoes online because I am very busy and it saves a lot of time. There are many choices online, which makes shopping easier and very convenient. However, sometimes I still go to the store if I need to try them on.

建议: 回答中数字表达不准确，句子结构不完整，且部分词汇使用不当。建议准确表达数字和货币单位，使用完整句子，并丰富细节使内容更具体。

示例: I usually spend about 500 to 1800 Chinese Yuan per year on shoes. I think this amount is enough to buy good quality shoes with nice designs. For example, last year I bought a pair of sports shoes that was quite expensive but very comfortable to wear.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，且部分词汇使用错误。建议注意语法结构，避免拼写错误，使用恰当的词汇表达观点，并使句子更连贯。

示例: I prefer fashionable shoes because I am very interested in fashion. I like to follow the trends and express my own style. Although comfortable shoes are nice, I enjoy wearing shoes that look stylish and make me feel confident and happy.

× I don't buy Zen every often, maybe around four time a year.

✓ I don't buy shoes very often, maybe around four times a year.

这里'shoes'是复数形式，'time'应使用复数'times'，表示次数。'Zen'应为'shoes'，且'very often'拼写错误。

× You usually one my old one wear out.

✓ Usually I buy new ones when my old ones wear out.

句子结构混乱，'one'应为复数'ones'，表示鞋子。需要调整语序使句子通顺。

× Umm, it's always feel great to get new shoes.

✓ Umm, it always feels great to get new shoes.

'feel'应使用第三人称单数形式'feels'，因为主语是单数'it'。

× Yes I do, I buying shoes online because I'm very busy and save a lot of times.

✓ Yes I do, I buy shoes online because I'm very busy and save a lot of time.

'I buying'应改为'I buy'，动词不应加-ing形式。'times'应为不可数名词'time'。

× Umm there are all many choose online which make shopping easels and it's very convenient but sometimes I still go to the store if I really need to try them one.

✓ Umm, there are many choices online which make shopping easier and it's very convenient, but sometimes I still go to the store if I really need to try them on.

'choose'应为名词'choices'，表示选择。'easels'应为'adjective'形式'easier'。'one'应为副词'on'。

× I usually spend about 500 or CN¥1800 on a per year of shoes.

✓ I usually spend about 500 or CN¥1800 per year on shoes.

'a per year'表达错误，应为'per year'。'shoes'复数形式正确。

× Very nice designs.

✓ They have very nice designs.

句子缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× I remember buying a pair of stock shoes last year which was quality expensive but very comfortable to wear.

✓ I remember buying a pair of stock shoes last year which was quite expensive but very comfortable to wear.

'quality'用错，应为副词'quite'修饰'adjective'。

× I prefer fashionable shoes because I'm a very interested in fashion.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because I'm very interested in fashion.

'a very interested'中'a'不应出现，'interested'是形容词，前面不加冠词。

× Uh, I like to follow the train and express my own style.

✓ Uh, I like to follow the trend and express my own style.

'train'拼写错误，应为'trend'，表示潮流。

× Comfortable shoes I nice, but I enjoying shoes that are look at the Astonish mall wear.

✓ Comfortable shoes are nice, but I enjoy shoes that look astonishingly good when worn.

句子结构错误，'I nice'应为'are nice'。'I enjoying'应为'I enjoy'。'look at the Astonish mall wear'表达不通顺，改为'look astonishingly good when worn'。

× Fashionable shoes made me feel confident and delighted.

✓ Fashionable shoes make me feel confident and delighted.

时态错误，描述习惯应使用一般现在时'make'，而非过去时'made'。