鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

示例: Yes, I really like buying new shoes, especially when I start a new school term. However, because shoes can be expensive, I usually buy them only twice a year.

建议: Cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'when I shop online' thay vì 'when I shopping online'. Nên dùng câu mạch lạc, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

示例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because I can use discount vouchers, which help me get a lower price.

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt lủng củng. Nên dùng câu hoàn chỉnh và cụ thể hơn về số tiền và lý do.

示例: I usually spend less than 1,000,000 Vietnamese Dong on shoes because I believe cheap shoes are often of lower quality.

建议: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng có thể dùng từ vựng phong phú hơn và câu nối mạch lạc hơn để làm rõ ý.

示例: I think it depends on the situation. For special occasions, I prefer fashionable shoes, but for school or daily activities, I choose comfortable shoes so I can move around easily.

× Yes for sure, I really fancy a buying new shoes especially on my new duration when I go to school, but because it's quite expensive so I choose buy shoes two time a year.

✓ Yes for sure, I really fancy buying new shoes especially during my new period when I go to school, but because it's quite expensive, I choose to buy shoes twice a year.

The phrase 'a buying' is incorrect; 'fancy' is followed directly by the gerund form without an article, so it should be 'fancy buying'. Also, 'duration' is not the correct word here; 'period' or 'time' fits better. 'Two time' should be 'twice' to express frequency correctly. Additionally, 'choose buy' should be 'choose to buy' because 'choose' is followed by the infinitive form.

× Yes for sure, I really fancy a buying new shoes especially on my new duration when I go to school, but because it's quite expensive so I choose buy shoes two time a year.

✓ Yes for sure, I really fancy buying new shoes especially during my new period when I go to school, but because it's quite expensive, I choose to buy shoes twice a year.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to a period of time; 'during' is the correct preposition to indicate a time span.

× Yes, I often do that because when I shopping online I have more vouchers to discount, you know discount voucher to help me to buy with a lower price.

✓ Yes, I often do that because when I am shopping online I have more discount vouchers, you know, discount vouchers to help me buy at a lower price.

The verb 'shopping' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense: 'I am shopping'. Also, 'vouchers to discount' is awkward; 'discount vouchers' is the correct noun phrase. 'Help me to buy' can be simplified to 'help me buy'. 'With a lower price' should be 'at a lower price'.

× Yes, I often do that because when I shopping online I have more vouchers to discount, you know discount voucher to help me to buy with a lower price.

✓ Yes, I often do that because when I am shopping online I have more discount vouchers, you know, discount vouchers to help me buy at a lower price.

The singular 'discount voucher' should be plural 'discount vouchers' to agree with 'more' and the context.

× Well, not too much, but I often spend under 1,000,000 Vietnam No, because to get a good shoes, I think a cheap such a cheap shoes is not is a lower quality so.

✓ Well, not too much, but I often spend under 1,000,000 Vietnam Dong, because to get good shoes, I think cheap shoes are of lower quality.

'A good shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'a cheap such a cheap shoes' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'cheap shoes'. The verb 'is' should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'shoes'.

× Well, not too much, but I often spend under 1,000,000 Vietnam No, because to get a good shoes, I think a cheap such a cheap shoes is not is a lower quality so.

✓ Well, not too much, but I often spend under 1,000,000 Vietnam Dong, because to get good shoes, I think cheap shoes are of lower quality.

The currency name is incomplete and should be 'Vietnam Dong'. Also, 'to get a good shoes' is incorrect; no preposition is needed before 'good shoes' in this context.

× Well, I think it depends. For example, when I have to wear a shoe on a special occasion, I prefer fashionable one.

✓ Well, I think it depends. For example, when I have to wear shoes on a special occasion, I prefer a fashionable one.

'A shoe' is singular but the context suggests general shoes, so 'shoes' plural is better. Also, 'fashionable one' needs the article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct.

× But when I go to school or daily activities, I prefer comfortable ones to have my activity more active.

✓ But when I go to school or do daily activities, I prefer comfortable ones to keep me more active.

'Daily activities' is plural and needs a verb 'do' to be correct. 'Have my activity more active' is awkward; 'keep me more active' is a better expression.