鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
I like buying a shoe that fit my size and my size is 26 centimeters so it is difficult to find the shoe that fit me. But I really really buy. I rarely buy shoes because I I would like to use the shoes that last long.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Actually I, I buy shoes online many times because it is more convenient than going shopping. Uh, I have less time to go out for buying material that I need. So I, I also, umm, there is an record that I.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
It depends on shoes, how much money I have to spend, but uh, my size or my foot size is 26 meters. That is rather bigger, bigger and female uh. So I mostly I, it takes around ¥10,000 uh, to for my.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
I like comforter shoes better because, uh, at my, in my daily lives, I have to move around. Uh, I want, I want working at school and going upstairs. My activity is like going upstairs and walking around and, uh, sit, sitting and.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があり、自然な英語表現に改善が必要です。また、内容を明確にし、5文以内にまとめることを意識しましょう。
示例: I like buying shoes that fit my size, which is 26 centimeters. It is often difficult to find shoes that fit me well. Therefore, I rarely buy shoes because I prefer to use them for a long time.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答が途中で途切れており、内容が不明瞭です。文を完結させ、具体的な理由や経験を明確に述べることが重要です。繋ぎ言葉を使って論理的に話を展開しましょう。
示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online many times because it is more convenient than going to the store. Since I have little free time, online shopping saves me a lot of effort.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。具体的な金額を明確に述べ、理由を簡潔に説明しましょう。冗長な表現は避け、自然な英語を心がけてください。
示例: I usually spend around a510,000 on shoes because my foot size is 26 centimeters, which is relatively large for a woman, so I need to find suitable shoes.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が目立ちます。具体的な理由を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめることが大切です。
示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I move around a lot in my daily life. For example, I often walk and go upstairs at school, so comfort is very important to me.
语法
× I like buying a shoe that fit my size and my size is 26 centimeters so it is difficult to find the shoe that fit me.
✓ I like buying shoes that fit my size and my size is 26 centimeters so it is difficult to find shoes that fit me.
The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because the speaker is talking about shoes in general, not a single shoe. Also, 'fit' should be 'fit' for plural subject 'shoes'.
× But I really really buy.
✓ But I really rarely buy.
The sentence is incomplete and unclear. The speaker likely means 'I really rarely buy' to express infrequency. 'Really really buy' is incorrect and lacks meaning here.
× I rarely buy shoes because I I would like to use the shoes that last long.
✓ I rarely buy shoes because I would like to use shoes that last long.
The phrase 'the shoes that last long' is better as 'shoes that last long' without 'the' to generalize. Also, 'I I' is a repetition error.
× Actually I, I buy shoes online many times because it is more convenient than going shopping.
✓ Actually, I have bought shoes online many times because it is more convenient than going shopping.
The action of buying shoes online many times refers to past experiences, so present perfect tense 'have bought' is appropriate instead of simple present 'buy'.
× Uh, I have less time to go out for buying material that I need.
✓ Uh, I have less time to go out to buy materials that I need.
The phrase 'go out for buying' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go out to buy'. Also, 'material' should be plural 'materials' if referring to multiple items.
× It depends on shoes, how much money I have to spend, but uh, my size or my foot size is 26 meters.
✓ It depends on the shoes, how much money I have to spend, but uh, my foot size is 26 centimeters.
'26 meters' is incorrect for foot size; it should be '26 centimeters'. Also, 'depends on shoes' should be 'depends on the shoes' to specify.
× That is rather bigger, bigger and female uh.
✓ That is rather big for a female, uh.
'Bigger, bigger' is repetitive and incorrect. 'Big' is the correct adjective here. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing.
× So I mostly I, it takes around ¥10,000 uh, to for my.
✓ So mostly, it takes around ¥10,000 for my shoes.
The sentence is incomplete and has redundant words. It should clearly state the cost for shoes.
× I like comforter shoes better because, uh, at my, in my daily lives, I have to move around.
✓ I like comfortable shoes better because, uh, in my daily life, I have to move around.
'Comforter' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'comfortable'. Also, 'daily lives' should be 'daily life'.
× Uh, I want, I want working at school and going upstairs.
✓ Uh, I want to work at school and go upstairs.
The verb form 'working' is incorrect here; it should be the infinitive 'to work'. Also, parallel structure requires 'go upstairs' instead of 'going upstairs'.
× My activity is like going upstairs and walking around and, uh, sit, sitting and.
✓ My activities include going upstairs, walking around, and sitting.
The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. It should list activities clearly and consistently.
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