鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
I actually like buying shoes but not very often because my mum told me to always save money so that's why I rarely buy shoes and mostly in the year I bought only one to two pairs only.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
I have never bought shoes online but my mom did it for me once and it came like a bit RIP off so they promised each other not to buy shoes from the online store again.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
Umm, usually I don't spend lots of money on shoes because my budget is only around a normal price shoe which is around umm 20 to 30.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
Mostly I would prefer comfortable shoes because it make me feel good when wearing it, but it it would be good if a these two things combine into each other to make a perfect pairs of shoes.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 70.0建议: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and using linking words to connect ideas. For example, instead of repeating 'only' and 'rarely', you can say: "I like buying shoes, but I don't do it often because my mum advises me to save money. So, I usually buy just one or two pairs a year."
示例: I like buying shoes, but I don't do it often because my mum advises me to save money. So, I usually buy just one or two pairs a year.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 65.0建议: Improve clarity and naturalness by using correct expressions and linking words. Instead of 'a bit RIP off', say 'a bit disappointing' or 'not as expected'. Also, connect ideas smoothly: "I have never bought shoes online myself, but my mom did once for me. Unfortunately, the shoes were disappointing, so we agreed not to buy shoes online again."
示例: I have never bought shoes online myself, but my mom did once for me. Unfortunately, the shoes were disappointing, so we agreed not to buy shoes online again.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 75.0建议: Make your answer more fluent and precise by avoiding filler words and repeating similar ideas. For example: "I usually don't spend much on shoes because my budget is limited to around 20 to 30 dollars."
示例: I usually don't spend much on shoes because my budget is limited to around 20 to 30 dollars.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 70.0建议: Improve grammar and clarity by correcting verb agreement and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas: "I mostly prefer comfortable shoes because they make me feel good when I wear them. However, it would be great if fashionable and comfortable shoes could be combined to make the perfect pair."
示例: I mostly prefer comfortable shoes because they make me feel good when I wear them. However, it would be great if fashionable and comfortable shoes could be combined to make the perfect pair.
语法
× Mostly I would prefer comfortable shoes because it make me feel good when wearing it
✓ Mostly I would prefer comfortable shoes because they make me feel good when wearing them
The subject 'comfortable shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'make'. Also, the pronouns referring to 'shoes' should be plural ('they' and 'them') to agree with the plural noun.
× but it it would be good if a these two things combine into each other to make a perfect pairs of shoes
✓ but it would be good if these two things combined to make a perfect pair of shoes
The phrase 'a these' is incorrect; 'these' is a demonstrative adjective and does not need 'a'. 'Combine into each other' is awkward; 'combined' is better. 'Pairs' should be singular 'pair' because 'a pair' refers to two items together.
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