鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，避免重复，使用正确的时态和表达方式。

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes. Since I am a university student and walk a lot on campus, I usually buy a new pair of trainers about once a month.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并且使用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. There was a discount and a wide variety of options, which made it very convenient and useful for me.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，建议简洁明了地说明价格并解释原因，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: I usually spend about CN¥300 on shoes because I think this price is reasonable and affordable for me.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明原因。

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot at school, and comfortable shoes help protect my feet and keep me relaxed throughout the day.

× I need to wearing shoes in my daily life every day because I was a I'm a university student so I need to work a lot in my school so I always buy a pair of trainers about once a month.

✓ I need to wear shoes in my daily life every day because I am a university student so I need to work a lot in my school so I always buy a pair of trainers about once a month.

动词不定式后面应该用动词原形，不能用动名词形式。这里的 'need to' 后面应接动词原形 'wear'，而不是 'wearing'。

× Yes, I once bought a shoes bought a pair of shoes online because in the online shop there was a discount at that time and there are a variety of shoes for me to choose.

✓ Yes, I once bought a pair of shoes online because in the online shop there was a discount at that time and there were a variety of shoes for me to choose.

名词单复数使用错误。'a shoes' 是错误的表达，应为 'a pair of shoes'。另外，'there are' 应该与过去时态一致，改为 'there were'。

× so I always so I bought a shoes online.

✓ so I always buy shoes online.

'a shoes' 是错误的单复数搭配，应去掉冠词 'a'，直接用复数 'shoes'。另外，句子时态应与上下文保持一致，使用一般现在时 'buy'。

× Well, I usually spend about CN¥300 on shoes because I think at that price shoes is very is not, it is not a high price or too low price for me and I was very, it is surprise it's very accessible for me and I think the shoes at that price.

✓ Well, I usually spend about CN¥300 on shoes because I think at that price shoes are not expensive or too cheap for me and I am very surprised it's very accessible for me and I think the shoes at that price are good.

主谓一致错误，'shoes' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'。另外，时态应保持一致，'was' 改为 'am'。

× I think I'm wearing comfortable shoes can makes me feel very relaxed and convenient for me because I need to work in my school every day so I need to buy a pair of shoes to protect pair of comfortable shoes to protect my feet.

✓ I think wearing comfortable shoes can make me feel very relaxed and comfortable because I need to work in my school every day so I need to buy a pair of comfortable shoes to protect my feet.

动词 'make' 在第三人称单数主语后应为原形，这里 'can' 后接动词原形 'make'，不能用 'makes'。另外，句子中重复和结构混乱，需简化和调整。