鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e clear topic sentence dite paren, tarpor supporting details dite paren. Apnar answer e grammar o sentence structure improve korte hobe, ar answer ta beshi natural korte hobe. Apni answer ta 3-4 sentence e shesh korte paren, jate beshi bistarito hoy.

示例: Yes, I really like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes every two or three months because I enjoy collecting different styles. Whenever I see a pair that I like, I try to get them quickly.

建议: Apnar answer e sentence gulo clear korte hobe, ar linking words use korte hobe jate answer ta logical lage. Apni online shopping er karon bistarito bolte paren, ar sentence gulo natural English e hote hobe.

示例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because social media marketing is very popular in Bangladesh. Therefore, I find many good deals and options on these platforms, which makes online shopping convenient for me.

建议: Apnar answer e amount ta clear korte hobe, ar sentence structure improve korte hobe. Apni direct question er uttor dite paren, tarpor supporting details dite paren. Apnar answer e redundancy komate hobe.

示例: Usually, I spend around 20,000 to 25,000 taka on shoes. I prefer to buy good quality shoes, so I don't mind spending this amount when I find a pair I like.

建议: Apnar answer e clear topic sentence dite hobe, ar supporting details bistarito korte hobe. Apni linking words use korte paren jate answer ta logical hoy. Apnar sentence gulo natural English e hote hobe.

示例: I always prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because comfort is more important to me. Also, I don't like shoes with too many colors, so I usually choose simple and comfortable designs.

× I love shoes every time when I see a new shoes, uh, that time my.

✓ I love shoes every time when I see new shoes.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so 'a new shoes' is incorrect. It should be 'new shoes' without 'a' because 'a' is used with singular nouns only.

× I'm trying to collect the shoes because of I love these shoes and two or three months.

✓ I've been trying to collect shoes for two or three months because I love them.

The phrase 'because of I love' is incorrect; 'because I love' is correct. Also, 'for two or three months' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate duration.

× Every time I bought shoes on online because of I I'm, I always use her social media site that in our Bangladesh social media social marketing is so high.

✓ Every time I buy shoes online because I always use social media sites; social marketing is very popular in Bangladesh.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Every time' suggests habitual action, so present tense 'buy' is appropriate. Also, 'on online' is incorrect; it should be 'online'. The phrase 'because of I' is incorrect; it should be 'because I'.

× That's the reason I always bought from online.

✓ That's the reason I always buy online.

The phrase 'bought from online' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'buy online' without 'from'.

× I think I already spend my 15 or 20,020 thousand 2520 thousand or 25,000 because of uh most of the time when I choose uh, when I choose any shoes, then I bought the bought this.

✓ I think I usually spend around 15,000 to 25,000 because most of the time when I choose shoes, I buy them.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and unclear numbers. 'Already spend' is incorrect; 'usually spend' fits better. Also, 'then I bought the bought this' is incorrect; it should be 'I buy them' to match present habitual action.

× Always. I prefer comfortable shoes because of I don't like, I don't like. I don't like too much colours of shoes because it's not. I'm like, that's why I always.

✓ I always prefer comfortable shoes because I don't like too many colors on shoes; that's why I choose simple ones.

The phrase 'because of I don't like' is incorrect; it should be 'because I don't like'. Also, 'too much colours' is incorrect; it should be 'too many colors' because 'colors' is countable. The sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be combined for clarity.