鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够连贯且有语法错误，表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，明确表达购买鞋子的频率和偏好。

示例: I don't buy shoes very often. Usually, I buy new ones about four times a year when my old shoes are worn out. I prefer shoes that are comfortable and practical.

建议: 回答未完成且表达不完整，缺少结尾。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

示例: I rarely buy shoes online because I like to try them on at the mall near my house to make sure they fit well and feel comfortable. However, if I find a really beautiful pair online, I might consider buying them.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，表达不清晰。建议注意语法，使用恰当词汇，明确说明花费和购买鞋子的标准。

示例: I usually spend about 500 yuan on shoes. I don't focus much on the brand because I think comfort and quality are more important. For example, I prefer shoes that I can wear for a long time without feeling tired.

建议: 回答不够流畅且有语法错误，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达偏好并给出理由。

示例: That's a difficult question. If I have to choose, I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk long distances. Comfort is more important and practical for me.

× I usually only buy new shoes when I when my new ones are worn out, which happened about four times a year, for example.

✓ I usually only buy new shoes when my new ones are worn out, which happens about four times a year, for example.

句中“which happened”时态不正确，应与现在习惯动作保持一致，改为“which happens”。此外，句中多余的“when I”应删除。

× I prefer comfortable or steel.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes or steel-toed shoes.

“comfortable or steel”缺少名词，导致表达不完整，应补充名词使句子完整。

× I like shoes that are thoughtful that.

✓ I like shoes that are thoughtful.

句末多余的“that”导致句子不通顺，应删除。

× I have hardly ever bought shoes online because I prefer to buy them at the mall near my house.

✓ I have hardly ever bought shoes online because I prefer to buy them in the mall near my house.

通常说“in the mall”表示在商场内购物，使用“at the mall”也可，但“in the mall”更准确。此处可视为轻微用法问题。

× This way I can try them on to see whether they have a well and feel comfortable right away.

✓ This way I can try them on to see whether they fit well and feel comfortable right away.

“have a well”表达错误，应为“fit well”表示合适。

× However, if I find a really beautiful pair on.

✓ However, if I find a really beautiful pair online.

句子不完整，缺少宾语“online”或其他补充信息，导致句意不明。

× I don't force much on the bride because I believe comfortable and particularly are more important.

✓ I don't spend much on the price because I believe comfort and practicality are more important.

“force much on the bride”表达错误，应为“spend much on the price”；“comfortable and particularly”词性错误，应为“comfort and practicality”。

× For example, I prefer shoes that I can wear for long time without feel tired.

✓ For example, I prefer shoes that I can wear for a long time without feeling tired.

“for long time”缺少冠词“a”，“without feel tired”应改为“without feeling tired”，动名词形式。

× If must choose one.

✓ If I must choose one.

缺少主语“I”，导致句子不完整。

× Comfortable is important and practical for me then.

✓ Comfort is more important and practical for me then.

“Comfortable”是形容词，需用名词“Comfort”作主语；“then”应为“than”表示比较。