鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子，避免重复，明确表达购买鞋子的频率和原因。

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes once a year for the Chinese New Year because it is a tradition to wear new clothes and shoes on that day.

建议: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如'suitable still'应为'suitable style'，建议注意词汇准确性和句子流畅性。

示例: Yes, I often buy shoes online. I usually compare prices on different apps to find a good deal and choose shoes that match my style and budget.

建议: 回答中数字表达混乱且语法错误较多，建议分开表达现在和过去的情况，注意数字和单位的正确使用。

示例: I usually spend about 500 RMB on shoes because I prefer practical and comfortable ones. However, when I was in high school, I liked to buy trendy and fashionable shoes that cost around 1000 RMB.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但存在语法错误和口语填充词较多，建议减少语气词，使用更准确的时态和表达。

示例: Now, I prefer comfortable shoes because they are more practical and cost less than fashionable ones. However, when I was in high school, I liked wearing fashionable and cool styles.

× I just buy the shoes for one time a year, 100 a year just for the new year, uh, Chinese, Chinese traditional New Year's because we always wear new clothes and new shoes in the in that day.

✓ I just buy shoes once a year, 100 pairs a year just for the New Year, uh, Chinese traditional New Year's because we always wear new clothes and new shoes on that day.

这里“the shoes”不需要定冠词，且“one time”应改为“once”表示次数；“100 a year”应明确为“100 pairs a year”表示数量；“in the in that day”应改为“on that day”表示具体时间点的介词使用。

× we always wear new clothes and new shoes in the in that day.

✓ we always wear new clothes and new shoes on that day.

表示具体某一天时，应该用介词“on”，而不是“in”。

× I will check the price on the different apps and compare it carefully to find a suitable still.

✓ I will check the prices on different apps and compare them carefully to find a suitable style.

“price”应为复数“prices”，因为在多个应用上比较；“it”应改为“them”指代复数；“still”应为“style”，拼写错误。

× I usually spend about 500 RMB on the shoes because I prefer a practical and comfortable shoes

✓ I usually spend about 500 RMB on shoes because I prefer practical and comfortable shoes

“the shoes”不需要定冠词，且“a practical and comfortable shoes”中“a”与复数“shoes”不匹配，应去掉“a”且形容词前不加冠词。

× when I was a high school I usually like to buy some trendy and fashionable shoes that cost around 10,001 thousand CN¥1000.

✓ when I was in high school I usually liked to buy some trendy and fashionable shoes that cost around 1,000 CN¥.

“was a high school”应为“was in high school”；“usually like”应使用过去时“usually liked”；数字“10,001 thousand”错误，应为“1,000”。

× I prefer a practical and comfortable shoes

✓ I prefer practical and comfortable shoes

“a”用于单数名词前，不能与复数“shoes”连用，应去掉“a”。

× it's cost less money, uh, than the fashionable shoes.

✓ it costs less money, uh, than fashionable shoes.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故“cost”应改为“costs”。

× than the fashionable shoes.

✓ than fashionable shoes.

在泛指鞋子时，不需要定冠词“the”。

× when I was at high school, I like to the styles, the cool style.

✓ when I was in high school, I liked the styles, the cool style.

表示在学校时应使用介词“in”而非“at”；“like”应使用过去时“liked”；“like to the styles”结构错误，应为“liked the styles”。

× when I was at high school, I like to the styles, the cool style.

✓ when I was in high school, I liked the styles, the cool style.

描述过去的习惯动作，动词应使用过去时态。