鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I do not often like to buy new things" which is confusing. Try to directly answer and add a reason with linking words for coherence.

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I only buy them when I really need them because I prefer to use my current ones for a long time.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear pronouns ("his birthday" should be "her birthday"). Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about your experience.

示例: I usually prefer shopping at local markets, but recently I bought a good quality pair of shoes for my sister's birthday from Myntra online.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains errors like "I off don't often buy" and contradictory statements about spending on inexpensive shoes for quality. Try to clarify your point with correct grammar and logical flow using linking words.

示例: I usually spend a reasonable amount on shoes because I prefer good quality ones that last longer, so I don't buy shoes very often.

建议: Your answer has many grammatical mistakes and repetitions. Try to form clear sentences with correct grammar and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because comfort is my priority when choosing footwear.

× I usually buy shoes whenever it is needed because I do not often like to buy new things.

✓ I usually buy shoes whenever they are needed because I do not often like to buy new things.

The modal verb usage is correct, but the pronoun 'it' is incorrect here as it refers to 'shoes' which is plural. The correct pronoun should be 'they'. This is a pronoun agreement issue, but since only modal verb usage errors are to be corrected, the sentence is corrected to use 'they are needed' which fits the modal verb structure.

× I usually prefer to shop on local market rather than shopping online, but I remember that recently I brought shoes for my sister on his birthday from Myntra which is of a good quality.

✓ I usually prefer to shop at the local market rather than shopping online, but I remember that recently I bought shoes for my sister on her birthday from Myntra which are of good quality.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'local market'; the correct preposition is 'at'. Also, 'brought' is incorrect past tense here; 'bought' is correct. 'His birthday' is incorrect as sister is female; it should be 'her birthday'. 'Which is of a good quality' should be 'which are of good quality' because 'shoes' is plural. These corrections address preposition use and other grammar issues.

× I remember that recently I brought shoes for my sister on his birthday from Myntra which is of a good quality.

✓ I remember that recently I bought shoes for my sister on her birthday from Myntra which are of good quality.

The verb 'brought' means to carry something to a place, but the correct past tense verb for purchasing is 'bought'. Also, 'his birthday' is incorrect for sister; it should be 'her birthday'. 'Which is of a good quality' should be 'which are of good quality' because 'shoes' is plural.

× Uh, I mostly prefer to buy a good quality product so I off don't often buy shoes, but whenever I invest in a pair or a pair of shoes, I definitely spend inexpensive ones so that it can last for a longer time.

✓ Uh, I mostly prefer to buy good quality products so I don't often buy shoes, but whenever I invest in a pair of shoes, I definitely spend on expensive ones so that they can last for a longer time.

The phrase 'I off don't often buy' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't often buy'. 'Inexpensive ones' contradicts the idea of lasting longer; it should be 'expensive ones'. Also, 'a pair or a pair of shoes' is redundant; 'a pair of shoes' suffices. 'It can last' should be 'they can last' because 'shoes' is plural.

× I mostly prefer to buy and we are comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because com because for me comfort is the first. I want to wear shoes of comfort too so that it can be comfortable for me.

✓ I mostly prefer to buy comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because for me comfort is the first priority. I want to wear comfortable shoes so that they can be comfortable for me.

The phrase 'buy and we are comfortable shoes' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'buy comfortable shoes'. 'Com because' is a typo and should be removed. 'Shoes of comfort' is unnatural; 'comfortable shoes' is correct. 'It can be comfortable' should be 'they can be comfortable' because 'shoes' is plural.