鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Also, clarify your points with linking words and specific details. For example, instead of saying "because it's I don't think shoes is very important for me," you could say "because I don't think shoes are very important to me."

示例: I'm not really keen on buying shoes. Normally, I buy two pairs each year: one for daily use and another to match my outfits, as I don't consider shoes very important.

建议: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and making it more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your experience. For example, mention the convenience and the refund policy clearly.

示例: Yes, I have. In fact, I buy most of my shoes online because it's very convenient to find styles I like. Moreover, if I don't like them, I can easily return them for a refund.

建议: Focus on making your answer grammatically correct and clearer. Avoid unnecessary words and use linking words to show contrast between past and present. For example, use "but now" to indicate change.

示例: In the past, I was willing to spend around 200 Australian dollars on shoes, but now I've realised that spending between 40 and 60 dollars is enough for me.

建议: Try to improve your grammar and clarity. Use linking words to compare past and present preferences. Also, be more specific about why you prefer comfortable shoes now.

示例: When I was in my early twenties, I preferred fashionable shoes because they matched my outfits and looked cool. However, now that I'm 27, I prefer comfortable shoes, especially since I often travel and need to walk a lot.

× Normally I just buy 2 shoes every year, one for my daily uses and the other one to match my dress because it's I don't think shoes is very important for me.

✓ Normally I just buy 2 pairs of shoes every year, one for my daily use and the other one to match my dress because I don't think shoes are very important for me.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so it should be referred to as 'pairs of shoes' when counting. Also, 'daily uses' should be 'daily use' as 'use' is uncountable here. Additionally, 'shoes is' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes are' to agree in number.

× Yes I have, and to be honest almost every shoes are bought from the online store because it's super convenient to find a style that I like online and I can try it.

✓ Yes I have, and to be honest almost every pair of shoes is bought from the online store because it's super convenient to find a style that I like online and I can try it.

The phrase 'every shoes' is incorrect because 'every' is used with singular countable nouns. The correct phrase is 'every pair of shoes'. Also, 'pair' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'.

× In the past I'm willing to spend like 200 Australian dollar but nowadays I've when I've realised 40 to $60.00 of the shoes is enough for me so I will get this range of price.

✓ In the past I was willing to spend like 200 Australian dollars but nowadays I've realised that $40 to $60 for shoes is enough for me so I will stick to this price range.

'Australian dollar' should be plural 'Australian dollars' when referring to an amount. Also, the sentence structure was awkward; 'I've when I've realised' is incorrect and was corrected to 'I've realised that'. The phrase 'of the shoes is enough' was corrected to 'for shoes is enough' for clarity.

× In the past I'm willing to spend like 200 Australian dollar but nowadays I've when I've realised 40 to $60.00 of the shoes is enough for me so I will get this range of price.

✓ In the past I was willing to spend like 200 Australian dollars but nowadays I've realised that $40 to $60 for shoes is enough for me so I will stick to this price range.

The phrase 'I'm willing' is present tense but refers to the past, so it should be 'I was willing'. Also, 'I've when I've realised' is incorrect and was corrected to 'I've realised that'.

× When I was young, like in my UH-20 early 20 age, I prefer fashionable shoes.

✓ When I was young, like in my early 20s, I preferred fashionable shoes.

The phrase 'UH-20 early 20 age' is unclear and corrected to 'early 20s' to indicate age. Also, 'I prefer' is present tense but the context is past, so it should be 'I preferred'.

× When I was young, like in my UH-20 early 20 age, I prefer fashionable shoes.

✓ When I was young, like in my early 20s, I preferred fashionable shoes.

The verb 'prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was young'.

× I feel it should be match my outfit and it should lose.

✓ I feel it should match my outfit and it should look loose.

The verb 'be' is unnecessary before 'match'. Also, 'lose' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'look loose' to describe appearance.

× It should be looks cool.

✓ It should look cool.

The verb 'be' is unnecessary before 'looks'. The correct form is 'should look' without 'be'.