鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在错误，且信息不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并准确说明购买频率。

示例: I'm not really a big fan of buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes about two or three times a year.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，且细节描述不够具体。建议使用正确的句式，并具体说明购物平台和鞋子种类。

示例: Yes, buying shoes online is very common in China. I usually use the Jingdong app, where I can find many brands like Adidas and Nike.

建议: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，数字信息不明确。建议清晰表达花费金额，并避免语法错误。

示例: I don't spend much money on shoes because I'm not very interested in buying them. Usually, I spend around 300 yuan on a pair.

建议: 回答较为清晰，但语法和表达仍有不足。建议使用连贯的句子表达偏好，并具体说明原因。

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often walk or run long distances. Comfort is more important to me than fashion.

× Definitely shopping online is a very normal things in China.

✓ Definitely shopping online is a very normal thing in China.

这里的things是复数形式，但前面用的是单数的a，应该用单数thing。

× There have a lot of shoes that you can find and something just like artist and nick.

✓ There are a lot of shoes that you can find and something just like artist and nick.

There be结构中，主语是复数时，be动词应使用are而不是have。

× There have a lot of shoes that you can find and something just like artist and nick.

✓ There are a lot of shoes that you can find and some just like artist and nick.

something用法不当，表示一些时应使用some。

× Well as I said before I'm not a big fan of sport bar buying shoes so I spent a small amount of money on that.

✓ Well as I said before I'm not a big fan of sports or buying shoes so I spend a small amount of money on that.

sport bar应为sports，且时态应与上下文一致，使用一般现在时spend。

× I have no collusion my many on that.

✓ I have no conclusion on my money on that.

原句中collusion和my many用法错误，应为conclusion和my money。

× I will buy shoes almost 3 * a year.

✓ I buy shoes almost 3 times a year.

表达频率时应使用一般现在时，且3 *应改为3 times。

× Something more less something less than this.

✓ Something more or less something less than this.

more less用法错误，应为more or less表示大约。

× While I'm say I'm not shopping man, so I will say I'm not a big fan of buying shoes.

✓ While I would say I'm not a shopping man, so I will say I'm not a big fan of buying shoes.

I'm say用法错误，应使用would say表达假设或委婉语气。

× I bought my shoes online is at one app which is called Jingdong app.

✓ I bought my shoes online on an app which is called Jingdong app.

句中is用法错误，应使用介词on连接地点。

× I bought my shoes online is at one app which is called Jingdong app.

✓ I bought my shoes online on an app which is called Jingdong app.

使用介词at不合适，表示在某个应用上应使用on。

× When I choose some shoes I need to 1st. The concern is which is can make me comfortable.

✓ When I choose some shoes I need to first consider. The concern is which can make me comfortable.

句子不完整，need to后应接动词原形，which is can错误，应为which can。

× That's because I need used shoes to run or walk for long distance.

✓ That's because I need to use shoes to run or walk long distances.

used用法错误，应为use，long distance应为复数long distances。