鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
I don't like Baishi, I see the shoot without holes and which is uh not dirty and you can wear it decently is enough. And I only buy the new shoes when the before 1 is broken but maybe it is once a year.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, I have both shoes on lights and to be honest, I'm merely bicious on the lights because I think it's isn't convenient and also in our country, uh, shopping online is very popular and you can buy everything there just to, uh, find their names and.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
I usually spend CN¥1000 on shoes because I see the price on the shoes. At this price I'll have a higher quality and worse than money. And if the price is higher, I think it's too expensive for me. I prefer to use more money on clothes and the pants, which will catch more eyes.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
I prefer the comfortable shoes because I see it's very important in daily wearing and a fashionable shoes will overheard their food and make you uncomfortable and it will hurt your mood in your daily life. So I would never choose it. Also this one will be uh expensive and not.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 40.0建议: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，语法和词汇错误较多，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单明了的语言描述购买鞋子的频率和原因。
示例: I don't like buying shoes often. I usually buy new shoes only when my old ones are worn out, which happens about once a year.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 35.0建议: 回答内容不连贯，表达不清楚，缺少具体细节。建议用简洁的句子表达是否网购过鞋子，并说明原因或感受，避免无意义的词汇。
示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. However, I find it inconvenient sometimes because I cannot try them on. But online shopping is very popular in my country.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答中表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议直接说明通常花多少钱买鞋，并解释原因，使用连贯的句子和恰当的词汇。
示例: I usually spend about 1000 yuan on shoes because I believe this price ensures good quality. If the price is higher, I think it's too expensive. I prefer to spend more money on clothes that attract more attention.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 45.0建议: 回答表达不清楚，有语法和词汇错误。建议直接表达偏好，说明原因，避免无关或错误的词汇，保持句子简洁连贯。
示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are important for daily wear. Fashionable shoes can be uncomfortable and affect my mood, so I usually avoid them.
语法
× I don't like Baishi, I see the shoot without holes and which is uh not dirty and you can wear it decently is enough.
✓ I don't like Baishi. I think shoes without holes, which are not dirty and can be worn decently, are enough.
这里'shoot'应为'shoes'，单复数错误。'shoot'是单数，且意思不符，应改为复数'shoes'。
× And I only buy the new shoes when the before 1 is broken but maybe it is once a year.
✓ And I only buy new shoes when the previous ones are broken, but maybe it's once a year.
'the before 1'表达不正确，应为复数形式'previous ones'，表示之前的鞋子。
× Yes, I have both shoes on lights and to be honest, I'm merely bicious on the lights because I think it's isn't convenient and also in our country, uh, shopping online is very popular and you can buy everything there just to, uh, find their names and.
✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online, and to be honest, I'm not very keen on online shopping because I think it isn't convenient. Also, in our country, shopping online is very popular and you can buy everything there just by searching their names.
'both shoes on lights'表达不清且单复数错误，应改为'bought shoes online'。
× Yes, I have both shoes on lights and to be honest, I'm merely bicious on the lights because I think it's isn't convenient and also in our country, uh, shopping online is very popular and you can buy everything there just to, uh, find their names and.
✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online, and to be honest, I'm not very keen on online shopping because I think it isn't convenient. Also, in our country, shopping online is very popular and you can buy everything there just by searching their names.
'I'm merely bicious on the lights'中'lights'用词错误，应为'online shopping'或类似表达。
× Yes, I have both shoes on lights and to be honest, I'm merely bicious on the lights because I think it's isn't convenient and also in our country, uh, shopping online is very popular and you can buy everything there just to, uh, find their names and.
✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online, and to be honest, I'm not very keen on online shopping because I think it isn't convenient. Also, in our country, shopping online is very popular and you can buy everything there just by searching their names.
'on lights'和'on the lights'是错误的介词搭配，应改为'online'或'via online shopping'。
× I usually spend CN¥1000 on shoes because I see the price on the shoes.
✓ I usually spend CN¥1000 on shoes because I think the price of the shoes is reasonable.
'see the price on the shoes'表达不自然，且语义不清，应改为'think the price of the shoes is reasonable'。
× At this price I'll have a higher quality and worse than money.
✓ At this price, I'll get higher quality and better value for money.
'worse than money'表达错误，应为'better value for money'，形容物有所值。
× And if the price is higher, I think it's too expensive for me.
✓ If the price is higher, I think it's too expensive for me.
句首不宜用'And'连接，应直接用'If'引导条件句。
× I prefer to use more money on clothes and the pants, which will catch more eyes.
✓ I prefer to spend more money on clothes and pants, which will catch more eyes.
'the pants'中冠词使用错误，且'clothes'和'pants'均为复数，去掉'the'更自然。
× I prefer the comfortable shoes because I see it's very important in daily wearing and a fashionable shoes will overheard their food and make you uncomfortable and it will hurt your mood in your daily life.
✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I think they are very important for daily wear, and fashionable shoes will hurt your feet and make you uncomfortable, which will affect your mood in daily life.
'the comfortable shoes'和'a fashionable shoes'冠词使用错误，应分别改为'comfortable shoes'和'fashionable shoes'。
× I prefer the comfortable shoes because I see it's very important in daily wearing and a fashionable shoes will overheard their food and make you uncomfortable and it will hurt your mood in your daily life.
✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I think they are very important for daily wear, and fashionable shoes will hurt your feet and make you uncomfortable, which will affect your mood in daily life.
'overheard their food'是错误表达，应为'hurt your feet'，意思是伤脚。
× So I would never choose it. Also this one will be uh expensive and not.
✓ So I would never choose them. Also, they are expensive and not comfortable.
'this one'指代复数鞋子，应使用'them'。
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