鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构和时态的正确使用，同时避免重复和不必要的内容。可以简洁明了地表达自己喜欢买鞋但买得不频繁的原因。

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them often because I am a student and my parents usually buy shoes for me.

建议: 回答中表达了观点，但部分词汇使用不准确，如“repair technology of development”应改为“rapid development of technology”。建议使用更准确的词汇，并注意句子流畅性。

示例: Yes, with the rapid development of technology, online shopping has become very convenient. I can choose different styles and sizes on the website and buy shoes without leaving my house.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，并具体说明花费的货币单位。

示例: I rarely buy shoes, only when my old ones are worn out. I usually spend about 200 yuan to buy a new pair because I think shoes are consumable items.

建议: 回答表达了观点并给出了理由，但有重复和语法错误。建议避免重复，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are easier to wear for a long time. Although fashionable shoes look beautiful, comfort is more important to me when I move around.

× I like buying shoes, but I am not often by them because I am student my mom's.

✓ I like buying shoes, but I do not often buy them because I am my mom's student.

这里错误地使用了介词“by”，正确的动词应该是“buy”，表示“买”。此外，句子结构也需要调整，使其更通顺。

× A lot of shoes my parents give me is only enough for me to eat, so I don't have much money to buy them.

✓ A lot of shoes my parents give me are only enough for me to wear, so I don't have much money to buy more.

“A lot of shoes”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。另外，“enough for me to eat”不合适，鞋子是穿的，应改为“wear”。

× Yes, with the repair technology of development, online shopping has become very convenient.

✓ Yes, with the rapid development of technology, online shopping has become very convenient.

“repair”是“修理”的意思，应该用“rapid”表示“快速的”，形容技术的发展。

× I can choose different style and size on the website and also I can buy them without leaving my house.

✓ I can choose different styles and sizes on the website and also I can buy them without leaving my house.

“different”后面修饰复数名词，应该用复数形式“styles”和“sizes”。

× I rarely buy shoes when my shoes were burnt out.

✓ I rarely buy shoes unless my shoes are worn out.

“were burnt out”时态和表达不准确，应该用现在时“are worn out”表示鞋子磨损了才买鞋。

× Maybe I will spend 200 to buy shoes because I think shoes were consumable.

✓ Maybe I will spend 200 to buy shoes because I think shoes are consumable.

“were”时态错误，描述一般事实应使用现在时“are”。

× I prefer comfortable shoes. I think fashionable shoes only have one advantage that is beautiful.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes. I think fashionable shoes have only one advantage, which is being beautiful.

“only have one advantage that is beautiful”表达不完整，应该用“which is being beautiful”来说明优势。

× When I work for a long time, comfortable shoes make it make it easier for me to move around.

✓ When I work for a long time, comfortable shoes make it easier for me to move around.

句子中“make it”重复，应删除多余部分，使句子通顺。