鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，有语音停顿和重复，建议简化句子结构，避免口语填充词，表达更流畅。

示例: No, I'm not very fond of buying shoes. I usually buy them about once a year because I tend to wear my shoes until they are worn out.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，且内容不够具体，建议减少口语填充词，注意主谓一致，内容应更贴合问题，避免跑题。

示例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because it is convenient and usually cheaper. Many websites offer a wide variety of styles and sizes.

建议: 回答中有语音停顿和重复，表达不够清晰，建议用完整句子表达价格范围，并说明原因，避免口语填充词。

示例: I usually spend around 300 yuan on shoes, but sometimes I spend up to 1000 yuan if I need shoes for work or special occasions.

建议: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，建议使用更地道的表达方式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because they allow me to work for long hours, which fashionable shoes usually don't.

× No I'm not a big fan of shoes.

✓ No, I'm not a big fan of shoes.

这里缺少逗号，虽然不是严格的语法错误，但加上逗号能使句子更清晰。

× I just buy shoes umm maybe once a year because I often just really wear shoes until it warm so I don't buy it very often.

✓ I just buy shoes, umm, maybe once a year because I often just really wear shoes until they are worn, so I don't buy them very often.

这里'shoes'是复数，指代时应使用复数代词'they'和'them'，而不是单数的'it'。另外，'warm'应为' worn'，表示鞋子穿旧了。

× in China, buying shoes online are very common and popular

✓ in China, buying shoes online is very common and popular

主语'buying shoes online'是单数形式，谓语动词应使用单数'is'，而不是复数'are'。

× And I usually buy shirts online because it's really, uh, affordable for, for me.

✓ And I usually buy shoes online because it's really, uh, affordable for me.

这里学生想表达买鞋子，但误用了'shirts'（衬衫），应改为'shoes'。

× For some career issues I would buy more expensive.

✓ For some career occasions, I would buy more expensive shoes.

'career issues'用词不当，应为'career occasions'或类似表达；另外，'more expensive'后应有名词修饰，如'shoes'。

× Comfortable shoes can make me work for a long time, which is fashionable shoes really couldn't provide.

✓ Comfortable shoes can make me work for a long time, which fashionable shoes really can't provide.

关系代词'which'后面不应有'is'，且时态应与前文一致，使用现在时'can't'。