鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho câu trả lời thiếu tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về tần suất mua giày và lý do mua.

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes a few times a year, especially for special occasions like school events or biking.

建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc. Ngoài ra, nên giải thích rõ hơn về trải nghiệm mua hàng trực tuyến của bạn.

示例: Yes, I have bought several pairs of shoes online. However, I was quite disappointed because the quality was poor and the price was too high for what I received.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi phát âm và ngữ pháp, làm cho thông tin không rõ ràng. Bạn nên nói rõ số tiền và đơn vị tiền tệ, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

示例: I usually spend quite a lot of money on shoes, around 7,700,000 Vietnamese dong for each pair.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít, cũng như cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và cung cấp lý do cụ thể cho lựa chọn của bạn.

示例: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because I want to look good and feel comfortable at the same time. I believe every brand should focus on making stylish yet comfortable shoes.

× I am a shoe header so I am by a lot of pair of shoes and I buy shoes quite often annually.

✓ I am a shoe lover so I buy a lot of pairs of shoes and I buy shoes quite often annually.

The phrase 'a lot of pair of shoes' is incorrect because 'pair' should be pluralized to 'pairs' when referring to multiple items. Also, 'header' is likely a typo for 'lover'. The correct plural form is necessary to match the quantity indicated by 'a lot of'.

× Each each year I buy a pair of shoes for prepare bike for school E event.

✓ Each year I buy a pair of shoes to prepare for the bike event at school.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'For prepare' should be 'to prepare' to indicate purpose. 'Bike for school E event' is unclear and likely means 'bike event at school'. The sentence structure needs correction for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I have more a pair of shoe online and it's make me quite disappointed cause the quality is really really bad and also the cost of that shoes is high and is not affordable.

✓ I have bought more than one pair of shoes online and it makes me quite disappointed because the quality is really bad and also the cost of those shoes is high and not affordable.

'More a pair of shoe' is incorrect; it should be 'more than one pair of shoes' to indicate quantity. 'It's make' should be 'it makes' for subject-verb agreement. 'That shoes' should be 'those shoes' to match plural form. These corrections fix singular/plural and verb agreement errors.

× I spend quiet a lot. I spend quite a lot of money on shoes and I it's about 7700 thousand down for each pair of shoes.

✓ I spend quite a lot. I spend quite a lot of money on shoes and it's about 7,700 thousand dong for each pair of shoes.

'Quiet' should be 'quite' to mean 'fairly'. 'Down' is incorrect; the correct currency term is 'dong'. Also, 'I it's' is ungrammatical and should be 'it's'. These corrections address spelling and preposition misuse.

× For me, I will choose the shoes that have both of them, a fashionable shoes with comfortable when I bring it.

✓ For me, I will choose shoes that have both qualities: fashionable and comfortable when I wear them.

'A fashionable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. 'Comfortable' is an adjective and should be paired with 'and' to connect qualities. 'Bring it' is incorrect; 'wear them' is appropriate for shoes. These corrections fix singular/plural and word choice errors.