鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi sai như "every often" (nên là "very often") và "refer to save money" (nên là "prefer to save money"). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh dài dòng và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I really enjoy buying shoes because they allow me to express my personal style. However, I don't buy shoes very often, maybe once every few months, because I prefer to save money and only purchase when I find something special.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, "save times" nên là "saves time", "prefer buy shoes on a store" nên là "prefer buying shoes in a store". Ngoài ra, nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online. It's really convenient and saves time. However, I prefer buying shoes in a store because I cannot try them on when shopping online.

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn về số tiền, đồng thời cải thiện ngữ pháp. Ví dụ, "a few millions Vietnam Dong" nên là "a few million Vietnamese Dong". Ngoài ra, câu "a good should make me feel confident" không rõ nghĩa, nên sửa thành "a good pair of shoes should make me feel confident" để rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I usually spend a few million Vietnamese Dong on shoes because a good pair should make me feel confident when I go out.

建议: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. "I report comfortable shoes" nên là "I prefer comfortable shoes". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes, especially when I have to visit many places or stand for a long time. This is because they make me feel more comfortable and help me avoid pain.

× I don't buy shoes every often, maybe once every few months because I refer to save money or only buy when I find something special.

✓ I don't buy shoes very often, maybe once every few months because I prefer to save money or only buy when I find something special.

The phrase 'every often' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'very often' to indicate frequency. Also, 'refer to save money' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to save money' to express preference.

× It's really convenient and save times.

✓ It's really convenient and saves time.

The verb 'save' should be in third person singular form 'saves' to agree with the subject 'It'. Also, 'times' should be singular 'time' when referring to the concept of time in this context.

× However, I prefer buy shoes on a store because shopping online I cannot try.

✓ However, I prefer to buy shoes in a store because I cannot try them when shopping online.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive 'to buy'. The preposition 'on' is incorrect; it should be 'in' for a physical location like a store. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'I cannot try them when shopping online' for clarity.

× I usually spend about a few millions Vietnam Dong for buying shoes because a good should make me feel confident when I go out.

✓ I usually spend a few million Vietnam Dong on buying shoes because good shoes should make me feel confident when I go out.

The phrase 'a few millions' is incorrect; 'a few million' is the correct quantifier. The article 'a' before 'good' is incorrect; it should be 'good shoes' to specify the noun. Also, 'for buying shoes' is better expressed as 'on buying shoes'.

× I report comfortable shoes, especially when I have to go to many destinations or stand for a long time.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes, especially when I have to go to many places or stand for a long time.

The verb 'report' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'prefer' to express preference. 'Destinations' can be replaced with 'places' for naturalness.