鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm willing to purchasing shoes”应为“I like buying shoes”。建议注意动词形式和主谓一致，同时避免使用不恰当的代词，如“you use”应改为“I use”。此外，回答应更简洁，避免冗余。

示例: I like buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair about once a month. I consider myself a trendsetter, so I enjoy choosing different styles to match my outfits and make them look more elegant.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“Buying shoes online feel”应为“feels”，且表达不够清晰，出现了“big bird burden”这样的错误词汇。建议加强词汇准确性，避免拼写错误，并使用连贯的句子表达观点。

示例: Yes, I often buy shoes both online and in stores. Online shopping is very convenient because I can easily compare prices and find good bargains, which makes shopping much easier.

建议: 回答中充满了犹豫词汇（如uh, umm），影响流畅度。语法错误较多，如“didn't make a calculate”应为“haven't calculated”。建议减少口头语，使用完整正确的句子表达，并尽量给出具体信息。

示例: I haven't calculated exactly how much I spend on shoes, but I think I spend quite a lot each month because I really enjoy buying them.

建议: 回答结构较好，表达了两方面的观点，但存在主谓一致错误，如“help me perform”应为“helps me perform”。建议注意语法细节，同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. Comfortable shoes help me perform better during exercise, while fashionable shoes add elegance to my outfits and make me feel more confident.

× I'm willing to purchasing shoes.

✓ I'm willing to purchase shoes.

动词短语中，'willing to' 后面应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式。

× I purchased shoes almost once per month because I'm considering myself a trendsetter.

✓ I purchase shoes almost once per month because I consider myself a trendsetter.

描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时，'purchased' 是过去时，不符合语境。

× I like you use different style of shoes to match my outfits, making my outfit look more elegant and gorgeous.

✓ I like to use different styles of shoes to match my outfits, making my outfit look more elegant and gorgeous.

'like you use' 结构错误，应为 'like to use'；'style' 应为复数 'styles'，因为指多种款式。

× Buying shoes online feel very convenient because I can easily compare the prices, helping me to find the big bird burden, bargain online and making the online shopping more easier.

✓ Buying shoes online feels very convenient because I can easily compare the prices, helping me to find great bargains online and making online shopping easier.

'Buying shoes online' 是单数主语，谓语动词应为 'feels'；'big bird burden' 是错误表达，应为 'great bargains'；'more easier' 是双重比较，应改为 'easier'。

× Well, actually I didn't make a calculate how much money I spent on shoes, but uh, I knew it might be a lot of money because every month I will spend uh umm, much money on buying shoes because umm, I really enjoying.

✓ Well, actually I didn't calculate how much money I spent on shoes, but I know it might be a lot of money because every month I spend a lot of money on buying shoes because I really enjoy it.

'make a calculate' 是错误搭配，应为 'calculate'；'knew' 应为现在时 'know'；'will spend' 改为一般现在时 'spend' 表示习惯；'really enjoying' 应为 'really enjoy it'。

× I prefer them both because wearing comfortable shoes help me perform better in terms of exercise.

✓ I prefer both because wearing comfortable shoes helps me perform better in terms of exercise.

'prefer them both' 中 'them' 不必要，直接用 'both'；'shoes' 是复数，谓语动词应为 'help' 的第三人称单数形式 'helps'。

× On the other hand, fashionable shoes can add a touch of elegance to my outfits, which help me look more confident and gorgeous.

✓ On the other hand, fashionable shoes can add a touch of elegance to my outfits, which helps me look more confident and gorgeous.

'which' 指代复数 'outfits'，但这里指的是 'a touch of elegance'，单数，谓语动词应为 'helps'。