鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免多余的词汇，并且句子结构应更清晰。

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy a new pair every two months. Sometimes my mother buys shoes for me, so I don't have to pay extra. I believe different shoes are suitable for different activities.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用正确的词汇和句型，避免重复和口语化的填充词。

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because there are many kinds available. However, the quality is sometimes unreliable, so I often have to return them.

建议: 回答不够清晰，数字表达错误，且句子结构混乱。建议明确表达花费金额，使用连贯的句子，并避免口语填充词。

示例: I usually spend about 100 dollars on shoes because I like branded ones that are comfortable and have patterns I like.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯，且最后一句话无意义。建议简洁明了地表达观点，注意语法和句子结构。

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because as a student, I need to walk and stand for long hours at school, so comfort is very important to me.

× I often buy shoes once two months.

✓ I often buy shoes once every two months.

这里的时间表达需要使用“once every two months”来表示“每两个月一次”，原句中缺少“every”导致表达不准确。

× Sometimes my mother buy shoes for me so I don't to pay extra fee for it.

✓ Sometimes my mother buys shoes for me so I don't have to pay extra fee for it.

主语是第三人称单数“my mother”，动词buy应加-s变为buys；另外，'don't to pay'是不正确的表达，应为'don't have to pay'表示“不需要付费”。

× And I think different shoes should in different activities.

✓ And I think different shoes should be used in different activities.

动词短语缺少“be used”，且“in different activities”是正确的介词搭配，原句缺少动词导致语法错误。

× I have both shoes online because they have a very kinds of shoes online,

✓ I have bought shoes online because they have many kinds of shoes online,

'both shoes'应为'bought shoes'表示“买过鞋”；'a very kinds'是错误的搭配，应为'many kinds'表示“很多种类”。

× I have both shoes online because they have a very kinds of shoes online,

✓ I have bought shoes online because they have many kinds of shoes online,

这里应使用现在完成时'have bought'表示过去发生且与现在相关的动作，原句用错了动词形式。

× I often need to return shoes online.

✓ I often need to return shoes bought online.

为了表达清楚，补充“bought”修饰“shoes”，使句子更完整。

× Uh, maybe 1001 shoes because I like buy some brand shoes and it is very comfortable and the pattern, uh, is checked for me.

✓ Uh, maybe 1000 yuan for shoes because I like to buy some brand shoes and they are very comfortable and the pattern, uh, is checked for me.

'1001 shoes'应为'1000 yuan for shoes'表示花费；'like buy'应为'like to buy'；'it is'应改为'they are'因为指复数的鞋子。

× I prefer to choice comfortable shoes because I'm a student I need you work a long time for my school,

✓ I prefer to choose comfortable shoes because I'm a student and I need to work a long time for my school,

'prefer to choice'应为'prefer to choose'；'I need you work'应为'I need to work'；缺少连词'and'连接两个句子。

× so a comfortable shoes is necessary for me and I think I can't fish.

✓ so comfortable shoes are necessary for me and I think I can't finish.

'a comfortable shoes'应为'comfortable shoes'（复数）且动词用are；'fish'应为'finish'，可能是发音误写。