鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
Yes, I like buying new shoes because it is important for me to support my hobbies that badminton and Clive Mountain because play sports is really wear out the shoes fastly so that I need to exchange the, uh, shoes, uh, frequently to protect my.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Of course, I like boats online, uh, because it is very convenient and save time and also I can use the saved time to do anything I want to do instead of uh, cost in taking bus or other transportation. Uh, it is important to uh, use my.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
Maybe $1000 a year. I think just like I said before, uh frequently exchange the shoes is significant for me to protect my feet and my ankle because I always play sports and is a wear out the shoes.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
I think I prefer to choose the, uh, comfortable shoes because the practical function of shoes is more safely significant for me. I always do the sports and club mountain, so I need the function to protect my.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达喜欢买鞋的原因，并避免重复和语法错误。
示例: Yes, I like buying new shoes because I often play badminton and climb mountains. These activities wear out my shoes quickly, so I need to buy new ones frequently to protect my feet.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 50.0建议: 回答中存在发音错误（boats应为buy），句子不完整且表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达网上购物的便利性，并避免语法错误。
示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because it is very convenient and saves time. I can use the extra time to do other things instead of spending time traveling to the store.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中数字表达清晰，但句子结构不完整且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题后，简洁说明原因，避免重复。
示例: I usually spend about $1000 a year on shoes because I play sports often, and my shoes wear out quickly. So, I need to replace them regularly to protect my feet and ankles.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答表达了观点，但句子不完整且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，清楚表达偏好并给出具体理由。
示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because their practical function is more important to me. Since I often play sports and climb mountains, I need shoes that can protect my feet well.
语法
× Yes, I like buying new shoes because it is important for me to support my hobbies that badminton and Clive Mountain because play sports is really wear out the shoes fastly so that I need to exchange the, uh, shoes, uh, frequently to protect my.
✓ Yes, I like buying new shoes because it is important for me to support my hobbies like badminton and climbing mountains because playing sports really wears out shoes fast, so I need to exchange shoes frequently to protect them.
这里“hobbies that badminton and Clive Mountain”表达不清，应改为“hobbies like badminton and climbing mountains”，表示“像羽毛球和爬山这样的爱好”。“play sports is really wear out the shoes fastly”中，“play sports”应改为动名词形式“playing sports”，“wear out”动词需用第三人称单数形式“wears out”，“fastly”是错误的副词形式，应改为“fast”。此外，“exchange the shoes”中“the”不必要，改为“exchange shoes”。这些都是单复数和动词形式的错误。
× Yes, I like buying new shoes because it is important for me to support my hobbies that badminton and Clive Mountain because play sports is really wear out the shoes fastly so that I need to exchange the, uh, shoes, uh, frequently to protect my.
✓ Yes, I like buying new shoes because it is important for me to support my hobbies like badminton and climbing mountains because playing sports really wears out shoes fast, so I need to exchange shoes frequently to protect them.
“play sports”应使用动名词形式“playing sports”，表示正在进行的动作或习惯性动作。
× Yes, I like buying new shoes because it is important for me to support my hobbies that badminton and Clive Mountain because play sports is really wear out the shoes fastly so that I need to exchange the, uh, shoes, uh, frequently to protect my.
✓ Yes, I like buying new shoes because it is important for me to support my hobbies like badminton and climbing mountains because playing sports really wears out shoes fast, so I need to exchange shoes frequently to protect them.
主语“playing sports”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“wear”应加-s，变为“wears”。
× Of course, I like boats online, uh, because it is very convenient and save time and also I can use the saved time to do anything I want to do instead of uh, cost in taking bus or other transportation. Uh, it is important to uh, use my.
✓ Of course, I like buying shoes online because it is very convenient and saves time, and also I can use the saved time to do anything I want instead of spending time taking the bus or other transportation. It is important to use my time well.
“cost in taking bus”表达错误，应改为“spending time taking the bus”。“taking bus”前应加定冠词“the bus”。“boats online”应为“buying shoes online”。
× Of course, I like boats online, uh, because it is very convenient and save time and also I can use the saved time to do anything I want to do instead of uh, cost in taking bus or other transportation. Uh, it is important to uh, use my.
✓ Of course, I like buying shoes online because it is very convenient and saves time, and also I can use the saved time to do anything I want instead of spending time taking the bus or other transportation. It is important to use my time well.
主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词“save”应加-s，变为“saves”。
× Maybe $1000 a year. I think just like I said before, uh frequently exchange the shoes is significant for me to protect my feet and my ankle because I always play sports and is a wear out the shoes.
✓ Maybe $1000 a year. I think, just like I said before, frequently exchanging shoes is significant for me to protect my feet and my ankles because I always play sports and shoes wear out.
“exchange the shoes”应改为动名词形式“exchanging shoes”。“my ankle”应为复数“my ankles”。“is a wear out the shoes”结构错误，应改为“shoes wear out”。
× Maybe $1000 a year. I think just like I said before, uh frequently exchange the shoes is significant for me to protect my feet and my ankle because I always play sports and is a wear out the shoes.
✓ Maybe $1000 a year. I think, just like I said before, frequently exchanging shoes is significant for me to protect my feet and my ankles because I always play sports and shoes wear out.
“frequently exchange the shoes”应改为动名词短语“frequently exchanging shoes”，作为主语使用。
× I think I prefer to choose the, uh, comfortable shoes because the practical function of shoes is more safely significant for me. I always do the sports and club mountain, so I need the function to protect my.
✓ I think I prefer to choose comfortable shoes because the practical function of shoes is more safely significant for me. I always do sports and climb mountains, so I need the function to protect me.
“the sports”应去掉定冠词，改为“sports”。“club mountain”应为“climb mountains”。“protect my”不完整，应为“protect me”。
× I think I prefer to choose the, uh, comfortable shoes because the practical function of shoes is more safely significant for me. I always do the sports and club mountain, so I need the function to protect my.
✓ I think I prefer to choose comfortable shoes because the practical function of shoes is more safely significant for me. I always do sports and climb mountains, so I need the function to protect me.
“do the sports”中“the”不应出现，应为“do sports”。“club mountain”应为“climb mountains”，动词用错。
× I think I prefer to choose the, uh, comfortable shoes because the practical function of shoes is more safely significant for me. I always do the sports and club mountain, so I need the function to protect my.
✓ I think I prefer to choose comfortable shoes because the practical function of shoes is more significant for me. I always do sports and climb mountains, so I need the function to protect me.
“more safely significant”表达不正确，应改为“more significant”或“more important”。“safely”是副词，不能修饰形容词“significant”。
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