鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
Yes, I wear the shoes for the different purpose. I have to wear the formal shoes when I have to better than any bedding occasion or party. But mostly I avoid a sports views to wear the regular.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, in the last month I explored the new article in the shoes. So I I have to choose the one article though and in order to in the online app and I give the better response for those app.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
I am not to spend the too much money on shoes because I have to want the comfort and the good stuff in shoes. So I have to explore the good quality and I manage the my money on that way on.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
No, I always do prefer the comfort in the shoes because I have to wear the sports and running shoe in the regularly in my life. So if I do to go with the fashion so I am not to take the comfort on that time so I must require the comfort in my daily life.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 40.0建议: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਸਹੀ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਕਈ ਵਾਰ ਅਰਥ ਸਮਝਣਾ ਮੁਸ਼ਕਿਲ ਹੁੰਦਾ ਹੈ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਸਿੱਧਾ ਸਵਾਲ ਦਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਣਾ ਅਤੇ ਵਧੀਆ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਕਰਨੀ ਚਾਹੀਦੀ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪੱਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜੋੜੋ।
示例: Yes, I like buying shoes because I need different types for various occasions. For example, I wear formal shoes for parties and sports shoes for daily exercise.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 35.0建议: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਸਹੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਦੀ ਘਾਟ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪੱਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜੋੜੋ ਅਤੇ ਵਧੀਆ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਵਲੀ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਕਰੋ।
示例: Yes, I bought a new pair of shoes online last month. I used an app to browse different options and finally chose a comfortable pair that suited my needs.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 40.0建议: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਸਹੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਦੀ ਘਾਟ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪੱਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜੋੜੋ ਅਤੇ ਵਧੀਆ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਵਲੀ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਕਰੋ।
示例: I usually do not spend too much money on shoes because I prioritize comfort and quality. Therefore, I try to find good quality shoes within my budget.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 45.0建议: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕਾਂ ਦੀ ਸਹੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਦੀ ਘਾਟ ਹੈ। ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪੱਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਨਾਲ ਜੋੜੋ ਅਤੇ ਵਧੀਆ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਵਲੀ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਕਰੋ।
示例: I always prefer comfortable shoes because I wear sports and running shoes regularly. Although fashionable shoes look good, comfort is more important for my daily activities.
语法
× Yes, I wear the shoes for the different purpose.
✓ Yes, I wear shoes for different purposes.
The phrase 'the shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is a plural noun and does not need 'the' here. Also, 'purpose' should be plural 'purposes' to match 'different'.
× I have to wear the formal shoes when I have to better than any bedding occasion or party.
✓ I have to wear formal shoes when I have to attend any formal occasion or party.
The phrase 'better than any bedding occasion' is incorrect and unclear. It seems the intended meaning is 'formal occasion'. Also, 'the formal shoes' should be 'formal shoes' without 'the'.
× But mostly I avoid a sports views to wear the regular.
✓ But mostly I avoid sports shoes and wear regular ones.
The phrase 'a sports views' is incorrect; it should be 'sports shoes'. Also, 'to wear the regular' is unclear; corrected to 'wear regular ones'.
× Yes, in the last month I explored the new article in the shoes.
✓ Yes, last month I explored new shoe articles.
The phrase 'in the last month' is better as 'last month'. 'Explored the new article in the shoes' is awkward; 'explored new shoe articles' is clearer.
× So I I have to choose the one article though and in order to in the online app and I give the better response for those app.
✓ So I chose one article through the online app and gave positive feedback for that app.
The sentence has tense and word choice issues. 'I have to choose' should be past tense 'I chose'. 'Give the better response' should be 'gave positive feedback'. 'Those app' should be 'that app'.
× I am not to spend the too much money on shoes because I have to want the comfort and the good stuff in shoes.
✓ I do not spend too much money on shoes because I want comfort and good quality in shoes.
'I am not to spend' is incorrect modal usage; 'I do not spend' is correct. 'I have to want' is incorrect; 'I want' is correct.
× So I have to explore the good quality and I manage the my money on that way on.
✓ So I look for good quality and manage my money that way.
'I have to explore the good quality' is awkward; 'look for good quality' is better. 'Manage the my money on that way on' is incorrect; corrected to 'manage my money that way'.
× No, I always do prefer the comfort in the shoes because I have to wear the sports and running shoe in the regularly in my life.
✓ No, I always prefer comfort in shoes because I regularly wear sports and running shoes in my life.
'I always do prefer the comfort in the shoes' is awkward; 'I always prefer comfort in shoes' is better. 'I have to wear the sports and running shoe in the regularly' is incorrect; corrected to 'I regularly wear sports and running shoes'.
× So if I do to go with the fashion so I am not to take the comfort on that time so I must require the comfort in my daily life.
✓ So if I go with fashion, I do not get comfort at that time, so I must have comfort in my daily life.
'If I do to go' is incorrect; 'if I go' is correct. 'I am not to take the comfort' is incorrect; 'I do not get comfort' is better. 'I must require the comfort' is awkward; 'I must have comfort' is better.
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