鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to speak more clearly and directly. Use simple and correct sentences without filler words like 'uh' or 'umm'. Also, clarify your frequency and preferences with specific details. For example, say "I like buying shoes and I usually shop for them once a year. I always look for shoes that are very comfortable."

示例: I enjoy buying shoes and usually shop for them once a year. I always try to find shoes that are very comfortable because I wear them a lot.

建议: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Give a clear reason and express your future intention clearly. For example, say "No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on to make sure they are comfortable. However, I would like to try buying shoes online in the future."

示例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I like to try them on first to ensure they fit well. But I want to try buying shoes online someday to have that experience.

建议: Speak more clearly and organize your answer logically. Use correct expressions for amounts and ranges. For example, say "The most I have spent on shoes is about 600 units of my currency, but usually I spend around 100."

示例: The most I have spent on shoes is about 600 Georgian lari, but usually I spend around 100 lari.

建议: Try to make your sentences complete and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say "I prefer comfortable shoes because I cannot walk well if they are uncomfortable. However, sometimes I like to wear fashionable shoes to feel special."

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I cannot walk well if they are uncomfortable. However, sometimes I like to wear fashionable shoes to feel special, like a princess.

× Bank shoes is my favorite activity.

✓ Buying shoes is my favorite activity.

The word 'Bank' is incorrect here; it should be 'Buying'. Also, 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should agree accordingly. 'Buying shoes' is a gerund phrase acting as a singular noun, so 'is' is correct.

× I did, uh, very often, but once a year I always try to shop shoes and the shoes, uh, that is umm, absolutely comfortable and absolutely.

✓ I buy shoes very often, but once a year I always try to shop for shoes that are absolutely comfortable.

The phrase 'I did very often' is incorrect because 'did' is past tense and does not fit here. The sentence should use the present tense 'I buy' to indicate habitual action. Also, 'shop shoes' should be 'shop for shoes'. 'The shoes that is' should be 'the shoes that are' because 'shoes' is plural.

× the shoes is comfortable.

✓ the shoes are comfortable.

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× I'm the person who prefers to suit the shoes on and to, uh, to know, uh, uh, exactly that, uh, the shoes is comfortable.

✓ I'm the person who prefers to try the shoes on and to know exactly that the shoes are comfortable.

The verb 'suit' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'try the shoes on'. Also, 'the shoes is' should be 'the shoes are' for plural subject-verb agreement.

× the shoes is comfortable.

✓ the shoes are comfortable.

Again, 'shoes' is plural, so the verb must be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× they the highest, uh, range of money I have spent on my shoes is UH-600 already.

✓ The highest amount of money I have spent on my shoes is UH-600.

The phrase 'they the highest' is incorrect; it should be 'the highest amount'. Also, 'range of money' is awkward; 'amount of money' is more appropriate here.

× the more and the less, maybe UH-100.

✓ Sometimes more, sometimes less, maybe around UH-100.

The phrase 'the more and the less' is unclear and incorrect. It should be rephrased to express variability in spending.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because if I'm not I don't feel comfortable when walking.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because if I'm not comfortable, I don't feel good when walking.

The sentence is incomplete and confusing. Adding 'comfortable' after 'if I'm not' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'I don't feel comfortable when walking' is better expressed as 'I don't feel good when walking' to avoid repetition.

× I I can't that way.

✓ I can't walk that way.

The sentence is incomplete; it lacks the verb 'walk' to complete the meaning.

× So I prefer to feel comfortable than to feel fashionable.

✓ So I prefer to feel comfortable rather than to feel fashionable.

The conjunction 'than' should be preceded by 'rather' to form the correct comparative structure 'rather than'.