鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "I don't like buying shoes very much and I rarely buy new ones because I'm not very interested in fashion."

示例: I don't like buying shoes very much and I rarely buy new ones because I'm not very interested in fashion. Usually, I only buy shoes when my old ones are worn out.

建议: Your answer is good but incomplete and lacks linking words. Try to finish your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I find buying shoes online convenient because it saves time and offers more variety."

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times. For example, recently I purchased a pair of running shoes that I use every morning. I find buying shoes online convenient because it saves time and offers more variety.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has some hesitation. Try to complete your sentences and provide specific reasons using linking words. For example, "I usually spend around 200,000 to 300,000 Vietnamese Dong on shoes because I prefer affordable and comfortable options."

示例: I usually spend around 200,000 to 300,000 Vietnamese Dong on shoes because I prefer affordable and comfortable options rather than expensive fashionable ones.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons using linking words. For example, "I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them all day, so comfort is my top priority."

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them all day, so comfort is my top priority. Fashion is less important to me than feeling good while walking or standing.

× To be honest and don't like buying Sue shoes very much.

✓ To be honest, I don't like buying shoes very much.

The original sentence lacks a subject for the verb 'don't like' and has an unnecessary word 'Sue'. Adding the subject 'I' and removing 'Sue' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× I think it's buying shoes online convenient because.

✓ I think buying shoes online is convenient because.

The original sentence has incorrect word order. The correct structure places the verb 'is' after the subject 'buying shoes online' to form a proper sentence.

× I usually spend around 200,000 to 300,000 Vietnam down Vietnamese Dong on shoes.

✓ I usually spend around 200,000 to 300,000 Vietnamese Dong on shoes.

The phrase 'Vietnam down' is incorrect. The correct term is 'Vietnamese Dong', which is the currency name. Removing 'down' fixes the prepositional error.

× I prefer affordable and comfortable shoes because.

✓ I prefer affordable and comfortable shoes because they are practical for me.

The original sentence ends abruptly with 'because' without completing the thought. Adding a reason completes the sentence structure.

× Well I prefer comfortable shoes because I use it along day so comfortable is the priority on my.

✓ Well, I prefer comfortable shoes because I use them all day, so comfort is my priority.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to plural 'shoes'; it should be 'them'. Also, 'along day' is incorrect; it should be 'all day'. The phrase 'comfortable is the priority on my' is awkward and corrected to 'comfort is my priority' for clarity and correctness.