鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be improved by adding linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and by avoiding minor grammatical errors. Also, try to avoid incomplete sentences like 'Just make sure I only purchase what I really need.' Instead, make it a full sentence for clarity.

示例: To be honest, I don't really enjoy buying new shoes because I find it time-consuming and sometimes overwhelming. Therefore, I usually buy new shoes only when my old ones are worn out, which happens once or twice a year. I always make sure that I purchase only what I really need.

建议: Your answer addresses the question well, but there are some pronunciation and grammatical errors such as 'physics physical stores' and 'it's offers'. Also, using linking words like 'however' can improve coherence. Try to be more precise and avoid repetition.

示例: Yes, I have occasionally bought shoes online, especially when I don't have time to visit physical stores. I find it very convenient because it offers a wide variety of brands and sales that I cannot find locally. However, sometimes I have to return or exchange shoes because the sizes are not always accurate.

建议: Your answer provides relevant information but is affected by frequent hesitations and unclear phrasing, such as 'it's the last, longer and more comfortable.' Try to speak more fluently and use clearer expressions. Also, linking words like 'because' are good but should be used correctly.

示例: Since I buy new shoes only once or twice a year, I usually purchase shoes from a reputable brand, which normally cost about CN¥1000 per pair. I find this worthwhile because the shoes last longer and are more comfortable.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'wearing a comfortable SH' and 'not fit my.' To improve, try to complete your sentences and use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' correctly. Also, avoid abrupt sentence endings and provide clearer explanations.

示例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot every day, sometimes up to 6 or 7 miles. Therefore, wearing a comfortable pair of shoes is essential to protect my feet. For example, fashionable shoes may look nice, but they often do not fit me well or provide enough support.

× I find it's time consuming and sometimes overwhelming.

✓ I find it's time-consuming and sometimes overwhelming.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated to form the compound adjective 'time-consuming' when used before a noun or as a predicate adjective. This clarifies that it describes the nature of the activity.

× Just make sure I only purchase what I really need.

✓ I just make sure I only purchase what I really need.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and verb structure. Adding 'I' clarifies the subject performing the action, making the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× I have occasionally bought shoes online, especially when I don't have time to visit physics physical stores.

✓ I have occasionally bought shoes online, especially when I don't have time to visit physical stores.

The word 'physics' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'physical' to describe stores. Removing 'physics' corrects the prepositional phrase.

× I find it's very convenient because it's offers a wide variety of brands and sales that I cannot find locally.

✓ I find it's very convenient because it offers a wide variety of brands and sales that I cannot find locally.

The subject 'it' requires the verb 'offers' without the auxiliary 'is'. Using 'it's offers' is incorrect; it should be 'it offers' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× But sometimes I have to return or or exchange because the sizes are not always accurate.

✓ But sometimes I have to return or exchange because the sizes are not always accurate.

The word 'or' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the duplicate 'or' corrects the conjunction usage.

× which normally cost about CN¥1000 uh, per pair, but I find it's worthwhile because it's the last, longer and more comfortable.

✓ which normally costs about CN¥1000 per pair, but I find it's worthwhile because it lasts longer and is more comfortable.

The verb 'cost' should be 'costs' to agree with the singular subject 'which'. Also, 'it's the last' is incorrect; it should be 'it lasts' to indicate duration. Adding 'is' before 'more comfortable' completes the comparison.

× sometimes up to 6 or 7 miles, so wearing a comfortable SH.

✓ sometimes up to 6 or 7 miles, so wearing comfortable shoes.

The abbreviation 'SH' is unclear and incorrect. Replacing it with the plural noun 'shoes' corrects the singular/plural issue and clarifies meaning.

× A pair of comfortable shoes is essential to help protect my feet.

✓ A pair of comfortable shoes is essential to help protect my feet.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× For example, fashion style shoes look good, nice but not fit my.

✓ For example, fashionable shoes look good and nice but do not fit me.

The phrase 'fashion style shoes' is awkward; 'fashionable shoes' is more natural. Also, 'not fit my' is incomplete; it should be 'do not fit me' to be grammatically correct and clear.