鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Answer wa chotto fukuzatsu de, eigo no shizen-sa ga tarinai desu. Tatoeba, 'I like buying shoes' to shika iwanakute, 'but I don't buy shoes very often because they are expensive' to setsumei shite kudasai. Mata, bun no nagasa wa 5 bun shika tsukawanai you ni shite, fukuzatsu na kotoba ya rinku-go wo tsukatte, rikai shi yasui hanashi ni shite kudasai.

示例: I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them very often because they are quite expensive. Usually, I buy new shoes once every three months or so.

建议: Kono kotae wa fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Eigo no shizen-sa to bun no kankei wo yoku shite, rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai. Tatoeba, 'Yes, I have bought shoes online twice. I bought Kobe Bryant shoes because I liked them, but I don't prefer buying online now.' to iu fuu ni, rinku-go mo tsukatte setsumei shite kudasai.

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online twice. For example, I bought Kobe Bryant shoes because I liked them, but now I prefer not to buy shoes online.

建议: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Taisetsu na pointo wa, seikaku na suuji to setsumei wo tsukeru koto desu. Tatoeba, 'I usually spend about 7,000 yen on cheap shoes for training at the gym.' to iikata wo renshuu shite kudasai.

示例: I usually spend about 7,000 yen on cheap shoes for training at the gym.

建议: Kotae ga fukuzatsu de, imi ga wakari nikui desu. Shizen de rikai shi yasui eigo wo tsukatte, bun no kankei mo kangaete kudasai. Tatoeba, 'I prefer fashionable shoes because I do bodybuilding and want to look good. However, comfort is also important.' to iikata wo renshuu shite kudasai.

示例: I prefer fashionable shoes because I do bodybuilding and want to look good. However, comfort is also important to me.

× I like the buying, uh, shoes.

✓ I like buying shoes.

The verb 'like' is followed directly by the gerund form without 'the'. Using 'the' before 'buying' is incorrect here because 'buying shoes' is a general activity, not a specific noun phrase.

× I don't often to buy the shoes

✓ I don't often buy shoes

The verb 'often' is an adverb and should not be followed by 'to' before the verb. The correct structure is 'I don't often buy shoes'. Also, 'the' is unnecessary before 'shoes' when speaking generally.

× but I buy only the shoes is 3/3, uh, once, uh, three months or once a month.

✓ but I buy shoes only about once every three months or once a month.

The phrase 'the shoes is 3/3' is incorrect. 'Shoes' is plural, so 'is' should not be used. Also, the time expression is unclear and should be rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× because the shoes is automatically expensive.

✓ because shoes are automatically expensive.

'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'automatically' is awkward here; it might be better to say 'generally' or 'usually', but keeping the original adverb for minimal correction.

× I have twice, uh, buying the, in the online that I buy the shoes

✓ I have twice bought shoes online

The present perfect 'have' should be followed by the past participle 'bought', not the gerund 'buying'. Also, 'in the online' is incorrect preposition usage.

× buying the, in the online that I buy the shoes

✓ bought shoes online

'Online' is an adverb here and does not require a preposition like 'in the'. The phrase should be 'bought shoes online'.

× like, umm, Kobe Bryant shoes

✓ like, umm, Kobe Bryant shoes

No correction needed here; 'Kobe Bryant shoes' is correct as a plural noun phrase.

× because it's, uh, nice to say, to say in the, the, the, the phone in my phone, but after that I don't like to buy again.

✓ because it's nice to say on my phone, but after that I didn't like to buy again.

The phrase 'nice to say, to say in the, the, the, the phone in my phone' is unclear and redundant. It should be simplified. Also, the tense should be consistent; past tense 'didn't like' fits better here.

× but after that I don't like to buy again.

✓ but after that I didn't like to buy again.

Since the action happened in the past, the past tense 'didn't like' is appropriate instead of present tense 'don't like'.

× I usually spend my and on my shoes, umm, like uh, uh, a cheap, uh, cheap shoes, like uh, 7007 thousand yen.

✓ I usually spend money on my shoes, like cheap shoes, about 7,000 yen.

The phrase 'my and on my shoes' is incorrect and unclear. 'Cheap shoes' is plural, so 'a cheap shoes' is wrong. Also, '7007 thousand yen' is an incorrect number format; it should be '7,000 yen'.

× I am the shoes is poor, uh training, like uh gym.

✓ My shoes are for training, like for the gym.

'Shoes' is plural, so 'is' should be 'are'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× like uh gym.

✓ like for the gym.

'Like gym' is incomplete; 'for the gym' correctly indicates purpose.

× I prefer to, uh, fashionable, uh, shoes because, uh, I know I, my body is, is, is nice because I, I, but I am, I am a bodybuilding and I, I want to, uh, I, I prefer to buy the, uh, fashion to shoes or like fans and.

✓ I prefer fashionable shoes because I know my body looks nice. I do bodybuilding and I want to buy fashionable shoes or something like that.

The original sentence has many pronoun and sentence structure errors. 'I know I, my body is, is, is nice' is incorrect; it should be 'I know my body looks nice'. 'I am a bodybuilding' should be 'I do bodybuilding'. The phrase 'fashion to shoes or like fans and' is unclear and needs rephrasing.