鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“usually buying”应为“usually buy”，并且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且明确回答频率。

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes every season, along with some clothes.

建议: 回答中时态使用不当，如“usually bought”应为“usually buy”。表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且避免使用数字表达比例。

示例: Yes, I often buy shoes online because there are more choices on websites than in shopping malls.

建议: 回答不够具体且语法错误较多，如“don't don't want face it”应为“don't want to face it”。建议直接给出大致金额或范围，并用完整句子表达。

示例: I usually spend around 100 to 150 dollars on shoes each time, but sometimes it varies depending on the style.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误，如“it's depends”应为“it depends”，表达稍显混乱。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更清晰。

示例: I like both fashionable and comfortable shoes. It depends on the occasion. For exercise, I choose comfortable trainers, but for other times, I prefer stylish shoes.

× I usually buying shoes maybe in each season.

✓ I usually buy shoes maybe each season.

这里的动词应该用一般现在时的动词原形，因为有助动词usually，不能用动名词buying。

× Well, I usually bought shoes online.

✓ Well, I usually buy shoes online.

句子中有usually表示习惯动作，应该用一般现在时buy，而不是过去时bought。

× It's more choices on the websites than the shopping mall.

✓ There are more choices on the websites than in the shopping mall.

表达“在网站上”和“在购物中心”时，应该用介词on和in，且句子缺少主语，应加上there are。

× Well, quite a lot I can't imagine and I also don't don't want face it.

✓ Well, quite a lot, I can't imagine, and I also don't want to face it.

句子结构混乱，缺少to不定式，且有重复单词don't don't，应删除重复并补充to。

× Well, I love both of them and it's depends which decision or not which occasion I'm in.

✓ Well, I love both of them and it depends on the decision or the occasion I'm in.

it depends后面不加s，且depends后应接介词on，which decision or not表达不清，应改为the decision or the occasion。