鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、"my shoes is broken"は"my shoes are broken"が正しいです。また、"there's no kind of sensible"の意味が不明瞭で、自然な英語表現に改善が必要です。回答は簡潔にし、文法と語彙の正確さを意識しましょう。

示例: I don't like buying shoes often. I only buy new ones when my current shoes are worn out because I think having one good pair is enough for me.

建议: 発言が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。"a side bolt my shoes online"や"my knowing my cells"は意味が通じません。オンラインショッピングに対する理由を明確かつ簡潔に述べる練習が必要です。

示例: I have never bought shoes online because I am afraid of choosing the wrong size. Once, I ordered shoes that did not fit well, so I prefer buying them in stores.

建议: 文法の誤りが目立ち、意味が伝わりにくいです。"I tried to spend money as few as I can"は"I try to spend as little money as possible"が適切です。また、"shoe sense"は不自然な表現です。明確で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

示例: I usually try to spend as little money as possible on shoes because I don't care much about fashion or brand names.

建议: 内容は理解できますが、文法と語彙の誤りがあります。"fashionable since ends up being dirty to wear"は不自然で、"fashionable shoes often get dirty quickly"などに改善できます。時制の一致にも注意しましょう。

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable shoes often get dirty quickly. Comfortable shoes make me feel relaxed and refreshed when I walk or run.

× I rarely buy shoes unless my shoes is broken.

✓ I rarely buy shoes unless my shoes are broken.

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× I think uh, to have one shoes is enough for me because there's no kind of sensible.

✓ I think uh, to have one pair of shoes is enough for me because it doesn't make sense.

The word 'shoes' is plural and cannot be used with 'one' directly; 'one pair of shoes' is correct. Also, 'there's no kind of sensible' is incorrect; it should be 'it doesn't make sense' to express the intended meaning.

× I don't know my shoe size correctly 'cause, uh, a side bolt my shoes online, uh, with my knowing my cells, uh, incorrectly.

✓ I don't know my shoe size correctly because, uh, I bought my shoes online without knowing my size correctly.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect prepositions and word usage. 'A side bolt' is incorrect; it should be 'I bought'. Also, 'with my knowing my cells' is incorrect; it should be 'without knowing my size'.

× I tried to spend money as few as I can because uh, I don't like cost too much on shoes.

✓ I try to spend as little money as I can because, uh, I don't like to spend too much on shoes.

The phrase 'as few as I can' is incorrect because 'money' is uncountable; 'as little as I can' is correct. Also, 'I don't like cost too much' should be 'I don't like to spend too much'.

× As I said before, uh, I don't care about the shoe size or shoe sense.

✓ As I said before, uh, I don't care about the shoe size or shoe style.

The word 'shoe sense' is incorrect and unclear; 'shoe style' or 'fashion' would be more appropriate.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable since ends up being dirty to wear.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable shoes end up getting dirty when worn.

The phrase 'fashionable since' is incorrect; it should be 'fashionable shoes'. Also, 'ends up being dirty to wear' is awkward; 'end up getting dirty when worn' is correct.

× Comfortable shoes always makes me comfortable and refreshing when I was walking or running.

✓ Comfortable shoes always make me feel comfortable and refreshed when I am walking or running.

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' instead of 'makes'. Also, 'refreshing' should be 'refreshed' to describe the feeling, and tense should be consistent with present tense 'am walking'.