鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. For example, instead of "I'm not very big fan of shoes," say "I'm not a big fan of buying shoes." Also, avoid vague phrases like "I would chase it"; instead, say "I only buy shoes when I need them." Keep your answer concise and clear.

示例: I'm not a big fan of buying shoes, so I usually only buy them when I really need a new pair.

建议: Improve sentence structure and use linking words for coherence. For example, say "No, I have never bought shoes online because I believe they might not look the same as in the pictures, and I'm also concerned about whether the size will fit me." This makes your answer clearer and more natural.

示例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I think they might not look the same as in the pictures, and I'm worried about whether the size will fit me properly.

建议: Use complete sentences and linking words to improve clarity. For example, say "It actually depends on the type of shoes I'm buying. For special occasions, I usually spend around 300 to 400 Canadian dollars, but for regular wear at home, I spend much less." This makes your answer more structured and easier to follow.

示例: It actually depends on the type of shoes I'm buying. For special occasions, I usually spend around 300 to 400 Canadian dollars, but for everyday wear at home, I spend much less.

建议: Correct grammar and use clearer expressions. For example, say "I prefer comfort over appearance because I think it's important to feel comfortable inside rather than just looking good." This makes your answer more natural and effective.

示例: I prefer comfort over appearance because I believe it's more important to feel comfortable inside than just to look fashionable.

× I'm not very big fan of shoes so I would chase it whenever I need them.

✓ I'm not a very big fan of shoes so I would buy them whenever I need them.

The phrase 'very big fan' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'very big fan' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'chase it' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'buy' to express purchasing shoes. Additionally, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'.

× No, I have never done that because I believe that it could not be as same as it shown in the picture and also I'm very concerned about the size of the shoes.

✓ No, I have never done that because I believe that it could not be the same as it is shown in the picture and also I'm very concerned about the size of the shoes.

The phrase 'as same as' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'the same as'. Also, 'it shown' lacks the auxiliary verb 'is' to form the present passive voice 'is shown'. This correction ensures proper verb form and phrase usage.

× Will it fit me or no?

✓ Will it fit me or not?

The phrase 'or no' is informal and incorrect in this context. The correct form is 'or not' to properly express the alternative in a question.

× Actually depends on what type of shoes I'm purchasing.

✓ It actually depends on what type of shoes I'm purchasing.

The original sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'It' as the subject corrects the sentence structure, making it a complete sentence.

× If it's for special occasion I would purchase them for around 300 to 400 Canadian dollars and if it's for regular wear at home I would purchase very less according to that.

✓ If it's for a special occasion, I would purchase them for around 300 to 400 Canadian dollars, and if it's for regular wear at home, I would purchase much less accordingly.

The phrase 'special occasion' requires the indefinite article 'a'. 'Very less' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'much less'. Also, adding commas improves sentence clarity. 'According to that' is better expressed as 'accordingly' for smoother flow.

× I will choose comfort over appearance. Umm, I think it's important to be comfort from the inside, not from outside.

✓ I will choose comfort over appearance. Umm, I think it's important to be comfortable on the inside, not on the outside.

The adjective 'comfort' is incorrectly used; the correct adjective form is 'comfortable'. Also, prepositions 'on the inside' and 'on the outside' are more appropriate than 'from the inside' and 'from outside' in this context.