鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like "I wanna set my clothes with black shoes" which is unclear. Also, avoid ending sentences with pronouns like "that I rarely use them." Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and have quite a collection. Most of my shoes are black because they match many outfits. I also own some white and pink pairs, but I rarely wear them.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid incomplete sentences like "No I didn't use." Also, the last sentence is confusing. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting reasons and use linking words to organize your ideas.

示例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer trying them on in stores. In my opinion, shopping in a mall is better since I can check the fit and comfort before buying.

建议: Your answer provides relevant information but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly and clarify currency if possible. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I usually spend about 1,000,000 VND on shoes. However, due to recent economic issues, prices have increased, so I have to pay more for a regular pair of shoes.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Avoid repeating phrases like "as you know, as I mentioned before." Also, clarify your points with better sentence structure and linking words.

示例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I am a nursing student at university. Since I spend a lot of time on my feet, comfort is more important than fashion for me.

× I have lots of shoes, most of them are black.

✓ I have lots of shoes; most of them are black.

The original sentence is grammatically correct in terms of singular and plural usage. However, a semicolon or a period is needed to separate the two independent clauses for better sentence structure. This is not a singular/plural issue but a sentence structure issue. Since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes listed, no correction is needed here.

× Besides black shoes, I have also white and pink shoes that I rarely use them.

✓ Besides black shoes, I also have white and pink shoes that I rarely use.

The pronoun 'them' is redundant because the relative clause 'that I rarely use' already refers to the shoes. Using both 'that I rarely use' and 'them' is incorrect. Removing 'them' corrects the sentence.

× No I didn't use.

✓ No, I haven't used them.

The phrase 'No I didn't use' is incomplete and incorrect. The correct form is 'No, I haven't used them' to indicate past experience with the present perfect tense, which is appropriate when talking about life experiences.

× I don't like to use online platforms for buying shoes.

✓ I don't like using online platforms to buy shoes.

The phrase 'for buying shoes' is less natural. Using 'to buy shoes' is the correct infinitive form after 'like' when expressing preference.

× I think if you choose your shoes, buy online platforms. This.

✓ I think you should choose your shoes in person rather than buying from online platforms.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper sentence structure and clarity. The correction provides a clear and grammatically correct sentence conveying the intended meaning.

× Because of economic issues, the price of shoes are increased in recent months, so I have to pay more money to buy a normal shoes.

✓ Because of economic issues, the price of shoes has increased in recent months, so I have to pay more money to buy normal shoes.

'Price' is singular, so it should be 'has increased' (present perfect). Also, 'a normal shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; it should be 'normal shoes' without 'a'.

× I have to pay more money to buy a normal shoes.

✓ I have to pay more money to buy normal shoes.

The article 'a' is incorrect before the plural noun 'shoes'. Articles like 'a' or 'an' are used with singular countable nouns only.

× I'm a University College so I have to use a comfortable shoes

✓ I'm a university college student, so I have to wear comfortable shoes

'University College' is a place, so saying 'I'm a University College' is incorrect. It should be 'I'm a university college student'. Also, 'a comfortable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; no article is needed. Additionally, 'use' is less appropriate than 'wear' for shoes.

× I'm studying nursing as you know, as I mentioned before for being nurse, I I can't use fashion shoes.

✓ I'm studying nursing, as you know. As I mentioned before, to be a nurse, I can't wear fashionable shoes.

'For being nurse' is incorrect; it should be 'to be a nurse'. Also, 'fashion shoes' is better expressed as 'fashionable shoes'. The verb 'use' is less appropriate than 'wear' for shoes.