鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
Yes I love buying shoes and maybe the frequency is like 3 months a time. I prefer buying shoes because I think shoes are the best. Goods for styling.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, I love buying shoes online cause online shopping is very convenient. Meanwhile if I choose the wrong size of the shoes, I can change another shoes just by emailing them.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
Umm for one pair of shoes, maybe it's like CN¥500. I don't like spend much money on shoes 'cause I think UMM shoes is just a product and we have to change it very often. It's just a product for styling, so I don't need.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
I can't decide it. I love them both 'cause, you know, fashionable shoes is usually for styling, but comfortable shoes is it is more practical. So if I have to choose, I'd like to choose both of them and I'll buy both of them so I can.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 65.0建议: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然。建议你直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并且避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以用连接词使句子更流畅。
示例: Yes, I love buying shoes and usually buy a new pair every three months because I think shoes are essential for styling.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 75.0建议: 回答较好，但可以用更正式的表达替代口语词汇，如"cause"。另外，连接词使用得当，但细节可以更具体。
示例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes online because it is very convenient. Moreover, if I select the wrong size, I can easily exchange them by contacting customer service via email.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的地方。建议用完整句子表达观点，避免口头语，并且提供更具体的理由。
示例: I usually spend about CN¥500 on a pair of shoes because I believe shoes are just products that wear out quickly, so I prefer not to spend too much money on them.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答表达了观点，但语法和句子结构需要改进。建议用更清晰的句子表达对两者的看法，并避免重复。
示例: I find it hard to choose between fashionable and comfortable shoes because fashionable ones look good, while comfortable ones are practical. Therefore, I prefer to buy both types.
语法
× I prefer buying shoes because I think shoes are the best. Goods for styling.
✓ I prefer buying shoes because I think shoes are the best goods for styling.
The phrase 'Goods for styling' is a fragment and lacks a verb, making it incomplete. Combining it with the previous sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.
× Meanwhile if I choose the wrong size of the shoes, I can change another shoes just by emailing them.
✓ Meanwhile, if I choose the wrong size of the shoes, I can change them just by emailing them.
The phrase 'change another shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and 'another' is used with singular nouns. Using 'change them' correctly refers to the plural 'shoes'.
× I don't like spend much money on shoes 'cause I think UMM shoes is just a product and we have to change it very often.
✓ I don't like to spend much money on shoes because I think shoes are just products and we have to change them very often.
The verb 'like' should be followed by 'to spend' (infinitive). Also, 'shoes' is plural, so 'is' should be 'are' and 'product' should be plural 'products'. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'shoes'.
× It's just a product for styling, so I don't need.
✓ They're just products for styling, so I don't need them.
The subject 'shoes' is plural, so 'It's' should be 'They're' and 'product' should be plural 'products'. The sentence is incomplete without an object after 'I don't need', so 'them' is added.
× I love them both 'cause, you know, fashionable shoes is usually for styling, but comfortable shoes is it is more practical.
✓ I love them both because, you know, fashionable shoes are usually for styling, but comfortable shoes are more practical.
The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, the phrase 'is it is' is redundant and incorrect; it should be removed.
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