鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำหรือคำที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้อง เช่น 'dishes' ควรเป็น 'shoes' และควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยบอกความถี่อย่างชัดเจน เช่น 'I usually buy shoes about 3 to 5 pairs each year.'

示例: I don't buy shoes very often. Usually, I purchase about three to five pairs each year, depending on my needs.

建议: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างประโยคที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'brought' ควรเป็น 'bought' และควรอธิบายประสบการณ์อย่างชัดเจนโดยใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'However, I often find that shoes bought online do not fit well because I cannot try them beforehand.'

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online. However, I often find that they don't fit well because I can't try them on before purchasing.

建议: คำตอบควรชัดเจนและสมบูรณ์ ควรใช้คำที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'issues' ควรเป็น 'shoes' และระบุสกุลเงินอย่างถูกต้อง เช่น 'baht' นอกจากนี้ควรอธิบายเหตุผลหรือรายละเอียดเพิ่มเติมเพื่อเพิ่มความน่าสนใจ

示例: I usually spend between 500 and 3000 baht on shoes because I believe it's important to balance quality and price.

建议: คำตอบควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'have' ควรเป็น 'had' และ 'shoots' ควรเป็น 'choose' รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค เช่น 'When I was young, I preferred fashionable shoes; however, now I choose comfortable shoes because they are better for walking and running.'

示例: When I was young, I preferred fashionable shoes; however, now I choose comfortable shoes because they are better for walking and running.

× Uh, I'm not really often buy dishes.

✓ Uh, I don't really often buy shoes.

The original sentence uses incorrect verb form and word choice. 'I'm not really often buy' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't really often buy' to express habitual action in present tense. Also, 'dishes' is incorrect in context; it should be 'shoes'.

× Umm, actually, uh, each year I buy the shoe.

✓ Umm, actually, uh, each year I buy shoes.

The noun 'shoe' is singular, but the context implies buying more than one pair, so the plural 'shoes' is appropriate.

× No, no more than 5 pairs I just buy for.

✓ No, I just buy no more than 5 pairs.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and structure. The corrected sentence follows proper English syntax.

× Yes, I have, but when I brought you from online it's not suitable for my feet all the time because I never try before and but always I I think it can.

✓ Yes, I have, but when I bought shoes online, they were not always suitable for my feet because I never tried them before, but I always thought they would be.

The verb 'brought' is incorrect; it should be 'bought' (past tense of buy). Also, 'try' should be in past tense 'tried'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and tense consistency.

× For issues I usually spend around 500 to no more than 3000 bar because I think.

✓ For shoes, I usually spend around 500 to no more than 3000 baht because I think so.

'Issues' is incorrect; it should be 'shoes'. Also, 'bar' is likely a typo for 'baht' (currency). The sentence is corrected for word choice and clarity.

× When I was young, I have two shoes of fashionable shoes, but now when I grow up, I always shoots the comfortable shoes because it's better when you walk and run.

✓ When I was young, I had two pairs of fashionable shoes, but now that I have grown up, I always choose comfortable shoes because they are better when you walk and run.

The verb 'have' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when I was young'. 'Shoots' is incorrect; it should be 'choose'. 'Grow up' should be 'have grown up' for present perfect tense. Also, 'two shoes of fashionable shoes' is awkward; 'two pairs of fashionable shoes' is correct.