鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but try to avoid filler words like 'Uh' and make your sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, for example, 'because' and 'so'.

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes because getting new items gives me pleasure. I usually buy shoes twice a year, either when my old ones are worn out or when there is a really good deal.

建议: Your answer is relevant and clear, but watch your grammar and sentence structure. For example, say 'most of my shoes this year were bought online' instead of 'bought this years were from online'. Also, use linking words like 'because' properly to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I have. In fact, most of my shoes this year were bought online because it is more convenient and saves me a lot of time.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and a bit unclear at the end. Try to complete your thoughts and avoid abrupt endings. Also, use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. For example, 'If the price is lower, I worry about the quality.'

示例: I usually spend around 100 to 200 Chinese Yuan on shoes, which I think is reasonable. If the price is lower, I worry about the quality, and if it is higher, it might be too expensive for me.

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and contains filler words like 'umm'. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically.

示例: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because when I was younger, I tried fashionable shoes that hurt my feet and even left scars, which I can still see today.

× getting new items always give me a lot of pleasure

✓ getting new items always gives me a lot of pleasure

The subject 'getting new items' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be singular 'gives' to agree with the subject.

× almost all my shoes bought this years were from online

✓ almost all my shoes bought this year were from online

The phrase 'this years' is incorrect; 'year' should be singular because 'this' refers to a single year. Also, 'bought this year' is correct past tense usage.

× were from online

✓ were bought online

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'bought online' to indicate the method of purchase.

× I think that's a reasonable price for me

✓ I think that's a reasonable price to me

In this context, 'to me' is more appropriate to express personal opinion or feeling about the price.

× Either lower or higher than that and would be some problems

✓ Either lower or higher than that would cause some problems

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear subject and verb. Adding 'would cause' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× For example when it's lower, I always think the quality would

✓ For example, when it's lower, I always think the quality would be poor

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly. Adding 'be poor' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× they usually not comfortable and hurt my feet

✓ they are usually not comfortable and hurt my feet

The verb 'are' is missing for the third person plural subject 'they'. The correct form is 'they are usually not comfortable'.

× and I can still you can still see it nowadays

✓ and I can still see it nowadays

The phrase 'I can still you can still see it' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the repeated part corrects the sentence.