鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundant words like "maybe probably" and try to combine sentences smoothly for better flow.

示例: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I only do it about two or three times a year.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your experience. Also, complete your sentences properly.

示例: Yes, I have tried buying shoes online a couple of times, but it was not very successful because it's hard to find the right size. Sometimes the shoes were too small or uncomfortable, so I decided to stop buying online.

建议: Your answer has some unclear parts and minor grammar mistakes. Be sure to use correct pronouns and provide a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: It really depends on the shoes. Sometimes I spend around €200, but other times less. However, if you want high-quality shoes, you need to invest a bit more money.

建议: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct prepositions, and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to contrast your preferences.

示例: I prefer both, depending on the situation. For example, when I go to the gym, I definitely choose comfortable shoes. However, for work or meetings with clients, I prefer fashionable shoes.

× I would say maybe probably twice or three times a year.

✓ I would say maybe probably twice or three times a year.

No correction needed here as 'twice or three times a year' is acceptable usage of quantifiers in this context.

× Yeah, I tried to buy shoes online couple of times but it was not very successful cause it's difficult to choose exactly your size.

✓ Yeah, I tried to buy shoes online a couple of times but it was not very successful because it's difficult to choose exactly your size.

The phrase 'couple of times' requires the indefinite article 'a' before it. Also, 'cause' should be replaced with 'because' for formal correctness.

× Sometimes it was small or sometimes it's not comfortable.

✓ Sometimes they were small or sometimes they were not comfortable.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'shoes' which is plural; 'they' should be used. Also, tense consistency requires past tense 'were' instead of 'was' or 'is'.

× So I decide to buy.

✓ So I decided to buy them.

The verb tense should be past tense 'decided' to match the previous past context. Also, the sentence is incomplete without an object; 'them' refers to the shoes.

× Depends really on his shoes.

✓ It depends really on the shoes.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrect here as the subject is the speaker. 'It' is needed as the subject of the sentence, and 'the shoes' is the correct object.

× Sometimes I spent €200, sometimes less.

✓ Sometimes I spend €200, sometimes less.

The present tense 'spend' is more appropriate here because the question is about usual spending habits, not a past event.

× Both of them, if I go for it on or to the gym, I definitely prefer comfortable shoes.

✓ Both of them. If I go to the gym, I definitely prefer comfortable shoes.

The phrase 'go for it on or to the gym' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'to' when referring to going to a place. Also, 'go for it' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× But if I go to work or if I have a meeting with client or something like that, I prefer to have fashionable shoes and I try to be both of.

✓ But if I go to work or if I have a meeting with a client or something like that, I prefer to have fashionable shoes and I try to have both.

The phrase 'with client' needs the article 'a' before 'client'. The phrase 'try to be both of' is incorrect; it should be 'try to have both' referring to qualities of shoes.