鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
No, I don't like to buy shoes. I don't have much money to buy shoes, so I usually buy shoes. Shoes of my mom. My mom always special for me. How often about the one most?
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, I have bought shoes about one years ago because I was a soldier that time so I can't go out so that I need to buy shoes online.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
I usually spend on shows about 500 hundred money. I are you rude? Don't spend, uh, spend for each lot of money.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
I don't care about it. I think comfortable shoes are better than fashionable shoes, so I always buy comfortable shoes. For example. It will improve my life level, that's it.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 40.0建议: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.
示例: No, I don't like buying shoes very often because I don't have much money. Usually, I wear my mom's shoes since she kindly shares them with me.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 60.0建议: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using correct grammar and linking words to make it more natural and coherent. Also, be more specific about the experience.
示例: Yes, I bought shoes online about a year ago because I was serving as a soldier and couldn't go out. Therefore, buying online was the only option for me.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 30.0建议: Your answer is confusing and unclear. Please answer directly with a clear amount and explain your spending habits using proper vocabulary and sentence structure.
示例: I usually spend around 500 dollars on shoes. However, I try not to spend too much money on each pair.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 50.0建议: Your answer shows your preference but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons or examples.
示例: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because they help me stay active and improve my quality of life.
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