鞋子— Part 1 评分报告
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Part 1
考官
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
考生
I am a big fan of fashionable so I really adore buying shoes. I buy shoes once a years because each shows it really impacts expensive so each year I will buy one.
考官
Have you ever bought shoes online?
考生
Yes, I have bar shoes online because sometimes I very busy, so I try to buy shoes online and it's really good. It's the shoes has a good qualities. Moreover, is can save your time so it's.
考官
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
考生
My shoes is quite expensive and because it's had good qualities so I spent about $500,000 to buy because however is very source for these qualities.
考官
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
考生
From my perspective, I adore comfortable shoes because I am a sporty person, I usually play volleyball so comfortable shoes is a good way for me to play volleyball better and it don't make my feet hurt. So comfortable shoes in my best choice.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
分数: 55.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc và ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi sai về số nhiều, số ít.
示例: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes because I like to keep up with fashion trends. However, I usually buy shoes only once a year since good quality shoes can be quite expensive.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
分数: 50.0建议: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi sai về thì và danh từ số nhiều. Ngoài ra, nên cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online because I am often very busy. Buying online is convenient and saves time. Moreover, I have found that the shoes I bought online were of good quality.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
分数: 45.0建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể về số tiền bạn chi tiêu. Ngoài ra, hãy giải thích lý do chi tiêu như thế nào để câu trả lời có chiều sâu hơn.
示例: I usually spend around $500 on shoes because I prefer to buy high-quality ones that last longer.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
分数: 60.0建议: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi về số nhiều, số ít. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích thêm về lý do bạn thích giày thoải mái.
示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I am quite sporty and often play volleyball. Comfortable shoes help me perform better and prevent my feet from hurting, so they are definitely my best choice.
语法
× I am a big fan of fashionable so I really adore buying shoes.
✓ I am a big fan of fashion so I really adore buying shoes.
The word 'fashionable' is an adjective and cannot be used as a noun here. The correct noun form is 'fashion'.
× I buy shoes once a years because each shows it really impacts expensive so each year I will buy one.
✓ I buy shoes once a year because each shoe is really expensive so each year I will buy one.
The phrase 'once a years' is incorrect; 'year' should be singular after 'a'. Also, 'shows' should be 'shoe' to match singular form, and 'impacts expensive' is incorrect; it should be 'is really expensive'.
× Yes, I have bar shoes online because sometimes I very busy, so I try to buy shoes online and it's really good.
✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online because sometimes I am very busy, so I try to buy shoes online and it's really good.
The verb 'bar' is incorrect; the past participle 'bought' should be used with 'have'. Also, 'I very busy' lacks the verb 'am'.
× It's the shoes has a good qualities.
✓ The shoes have good quality.
'It's the shoes has' is incorrect; 'The shoes have' is correct. 'Qualities' should be singular 'quality' when referring to the general characteristic.
× Moreover, is can save your time so it's.
✓ Moreover, it can save your time, so it's convenient.
'Is' is incorrect here; the pronoun 'it' should be used. The sentence is incomplete and needs a proper ending.
× My shoes is quite expensive and because it's had good qualities so I spent about $500,000 to buy because however is very source for these qualities.
✓ My shoes are quite expensive because they have good quality, so I spent about $500,000 to buy them because they are very rare for this quality.
'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are'. 'It's had' is incorrect; 'they have' is correct. The sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification.
× From my perspective, I adore comfortable shoes because I am a sporty person, I usually play volleyball so comfortable shoes is a good way for me to play volleyball better and it don't make my feet hurt.
✓ From my perspective, I adore comfortable shoes because I am a sporty person. I usually play volleyball, so comfortable shoes are a good way for me to play better and they don't make my feet hurt.
'Comfortable shoes is' should be 'comfortable shoes are' because 'shoes' is plural. 'It don't' should be 'they don't' to agree with plural subject.
× So comfortable shoes in my best choice.
✓ So comfortable shoes are my best choice.
The verb 'are' is missing to agree with the plural subject 'comfortable shoes'. 'In' is incorrect preposition here; 'are' is needed.
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