鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure for clarity. Use plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: I don't particularly enjoy buying shoes, but I usually purchase new ones when my old shoes are worn out or broken. Since I often engage in outdoor activities, I sometimes buy shoes quite frequently.

建议: Work on sentence fluency and grammar, especially prepositions and article usage. Use linking words to make the answer more coherent.

示例: No, I have never bought shoes online because I think there is a risk that the shoes might not fit properly. Therefore, I prefer to buy shoes in physical stores rather than online.

建议: Avoid filler phrases and unclear expressions. Use more precise vocabulary and structure your answer clearly with linking words to explain your spending habits.

示例: I usually spend between 3000 and 4000 NT dollars on shoes, but it depends on how much I like the shoes. If I really like a pair, I might spend more; otherwise, I spend less.

建议: Improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and avoid awkward phrasing.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because wearing fashionable but uncomfortable shoes can be risky. For example, they might cause injuries or pain if I walk for a long time.

× I'm not a big fan of buying shoes, but usually I will buy shoes whether my shoes is broken or is unable to work.

✓ I'm not a big fan of buying shoes, but usually I will buy shoes when my shoes are broken or unable to work.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'whether' is incorrectly used here; 'when' fits better to indicate the condition under which the action happens.

× So sometimes I buy shoe really often because I do outdoor activity very often.

✓ So sometimes I buy shoes really often because I do outdoor activities very often.

The word 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match the context. Also, 'activity' should be plural 'activities' because it refers to multiple instances of outdoor activities.

× So I would rather buy shoes and real store instead of online store.

✓ So I would rather buy shoes in a real store instead of an online store.

The preposition 'in' is needed to indicate the place where the shoes are bought. Also, articles 'a' are required before 'real store' and 'online store'.

× Usually I will spend about 3000 NT dollars to 4000 NT dollars, but it really depends on the shoes.

✓ Usually I will spend about 3000 to 4000 NT dollars, but it really depends on the shoes.

The phrase '3000 NT dollars to 4000 NT dollars' is awkward; it's better to say '3000 to 4000 NT dollars' to express a range clearly.

× It is a really, I really like it or I just feel so so about.

✓ It depends on whether I really like it or just feel so-so about it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Using 'whether' clarifies the condition, and 'so-so' is hyphenated as an adjective. Also, 'it' is needed at the end for clarity.

× I would say I prefer comfortable shoes because wearing fashion shoes but uncomfortable might feel a little bit scary because you may injured or break your leg in a long time walking so.

✓ I would say I prefer comfortable shoes because wearing fashionable but uncomfortable shoes might feel a little scary since you may get injured or break your leg after walking for a long time.

'Fashion' should be the adjective 'fashionable'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar: 'may injured' should be 'may get injured', and 'in a long time walking' is corrected to 'after walking for a long time'.