鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and slightly off-topic. You should directly answer whether you like buying shoes and how often you do it. Also, avoid mixing preferences for types of shoes in this answer. Try to be more natural and concise.

示例: I don't enjoy buying shoes very much, so I only buy them once or twice a year.

建议: Your answer is good but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Use linking words to make it more coherent and avoid redundancy. Also, try to be more specific about your feelings and experience.

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. However, I was disappointed with the quality of the two pairs I purchased, so I haven't bought shoes online since then.

建议: Your answer is a bit confusing and incomplete. Try to give a clear and direct answer about how much you usually spend, and explain briefly if necessary. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references.

示例: I usually spend up to 5000 rupees on shoes, but I only buy them once or twice a year because of the rising prices.

建议: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, clarify what you mean by 'centres'.

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes because I usually wear them for long walks or exercise. I don't buy fashionable shoes often since I already have heels and sandals that match my outfits.

× I remember this time I purchased 2 shoes from one online store and when I received it I was kind of disappointed at the quality of the shoes and ever since that I have never thought about buying shoes online.

✓ I remember this time I purchased 2 pairs of shoes from one online store and when I received them I was kind of disappointed at the quality of the shoes and ever since then I have never thought about buying shoes online.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so '2 shoes' should be '2 pairs of shoes' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'it' refers to a singular object but here it should be 'them' to refer to multiple shoes. 'Ever since that' should be 'ever since then' for correct expression.

× I remember this time I purchased 2 shoes from one online store and when I received it I was kind of disappointed at the quality of the shoes and ever since that I have never thought about buying shoes online.

✓ I remember this time I purchased 2 pairs of shoes from one online store and when I received them I was kind of disappointed at the quality of the shoes and ever since then I have never thought about buying shoes online.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun '2 pairs of shoes'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I remember this time I purchased 2 shoes from one online store and when I received it I was kind of disappointed at the quality of the shoes and ever since that I have never thought about buying shoes online.

✓ I remember this time I purchased 2 pairs of shoes from one online store and when I received them I was kind of disappointed with the quality of the shoes and ever since then I have never thought about buying shoes online.

The correct preposition to express dissatisfaction is 'disappointed with' not 'disappointed at'. Also, 'ever since that' should be 'ever since then' for proper usage.

× I do not really need to buy fashionable shoes as I have heels and centres which goes with every outfit.

✓ I do not really need to buy fashionable shoes as I have heels and sandals which go with every outfit.

The word 'centres' is incorrect; it should be 'sandals'. Also, 'heels and sandals' is plural, so the verb should be 'go' not 'goes' to agree with the plural subject.

× I do not really need to buy fashionable shoes as I have heels and centres which goes with every outfit.

✓ I do not really need to buy fashionable shoes as I have heels and sandals which go with every outfit.

The verb 'goes' does not agree with the plural subject 'heels and sandals'. The correct verb form is 'go' for plural subjects.