鞋子— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Improve grammar and clarity: give a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and prepositions, and avoid redundant phrases. Use one or two supporting reasons with linking words. Keep it under 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't do it very often because I try to save money. For example, I usually only buy new shoes when my old ones are worn out, so I might buy a pair once or twice a year.

建议: Make tense and article usage consistent and be more concise. Start with a direct answer, then give one or two clear reasons using linking words (because/so). Include a brief example or frequency if relevant.

示例: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because it is much easier now than in the past. For example, I often compare prices and read reviews on local e-commerce sites before I decide to buy.

建议: Correct sentence structure and vocabulary: state a typical amount or range, then mention exceptions using linking words (but/for example). Be specific and clear about currency and frequency.

示例: I usually spend between 1000 and 3000 taka on shoes, because I prefer affordable brands. However, last month I spent about 5000 taka on a pair of running shoes because I needed better support.

建议: Good clear opinion. Improve by combining sentences, using linking words for emphasis, and giving a specific example or contrast to support your view. Also correct minor grammar (comfortable -> comfort/comfortable ones).

示例: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because if shoes are uncomfortable I won't wear them often. For instance, I choose cushioned trainers for daily use even if they are less stylish.

× Yes I like buying shoes but I don't buy so many shoes because I don't want to waste my money.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy many because I don't want to waste my money.

The phrase 'so many shoes' is informal and 'so' unnecessary; 'many' alone is correct with countable plural 'shoes'. Also add commas for clarity. Use 'many' not 'so many' to match neutral statement tone.

× So when I need issue then I go to for buy this shoe.

✓ So when I need shoes, I go to the store to buy them.

The original has incorrect word choice ('issue'), incorrect verb phrase order ('go to for buy'), and mismatched noun forms. Replace 'issue' with 'shoes', reorder to 'go to the store to buy', and use 'them' as the pronoun for plural 'shoes'.

× Yes, many time I bought shoe from online because I think buying shoes from online is now very easier than past because now there are many ecommerce shop in our country so we can buy anything from them there.

✓ Yes, many times I have bought shoes online because I think buying shoes online is much easier than in the past; there are many e-commerce shops in our country, so we can buy anything from them.

Multiple issues: 'many time' should be 'many times' (quantifier and plural), 'bought shoe' needs plural 'shoes', 'from online' should be 'online', and tense should be present perfect 'have bought' when referring to life experience. Use 'much easier' (adverb + comparative) and 'in the past'. Also 'ecommerce shop' should be plural 'e-commerce shops'.

× I don't usually spend more money in my shoes bus, but last month I bought a shoe around 5000 taka.

✓ I don't usually spend much money on shoes, but last month I bought a pair for about 5000 taka.

Use 'much money' not 'more money' for general negative statements. Preposition 'on' is correct with 'spend money on'. 'my shoes bus' is unclear and likely incorrect — replace with 'on shoes'. 'a shoe around 5000 taka' should be 'a pair for about 5000 taka' (use 'pair' for shoes and 'for' with price).

× Yes, many time I bought shoe from online because I think buying shoes from online is now very easier than past because now there are many ecommerce shop in our country so we can buy anything from them there.

✓ Yes, many times I have bought shoes online because I think buying shoes online is much easier than in the past; there are many e-commerce shops in our country, so we can buy anything from them.

'ecommerce shop' should agree in number with 'many' -> 'e-commerce shops'. Also maintain consistent verb agreement and plural forms. (Note: This sentence has been corrected above; this entry highlights subject-verb agreement/plurality.)

× because I think buying shoes from online is now very easier than past

✓ because I think buying shoes online is much easier than in the past

Comparatives require adverbs like 'much' or 'far' with 'easier'. 'Very easier' is ungrammatical. Also omit 'from' before 'online' and add 'in the' before 'past'.

× The fashion is not very important.

✓ Fashion is not very important to me.

'The fashion' is unnatural; use general noun 'Fashion'. Add 'to me' to show personal preference. This clarifies meaning and matches conversation context.

× Comfortable is very important for us.

✓ Comfort is very important for us.

Use the noun 'comfort' rather than the adjective 'comfortable' when talking about a general concept being important. 'Important for us' is acceptable, or 'important to us' for preference.

× if the shoes are not comfortable, we cannot wear them.

✓ If the shoes are not comfortable, we will not want to wear them.

Original is grammatically acceptable, but to better match natural speech about preference and consequence, use 'will not want to wear' to express likely future/conditional intention. If strictly grammatical correction not required, the original is fine; change provides clearer intent.