规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit long and slightly unclear. Try to make your sentences shorter and more precise. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct grammar mistakes, such as 'is followed' should be 'are followed' and 'distract this rule' should be 'break this rule'.

示例: Yes, there are several rules at my school that all students follow. For example, we are not allowed to wear casual clothes because it can affect the school's reputation if someone breaks this rule.

建议: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and detail. Use plural forms correctly, such as 'students' instead of 'student'. Also, add linking words and more specific reasons to support your opinion. Avoid repeating the same idea without elaboration.

示例: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. For instance, following rules helps students build a good reputation in school and maintain discipline in the classroom.

建议: Your answer needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Use correct verb forms like 'teaches' and 'explains'. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'you know'. Try to give more specific details about why the teacher is good and use linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, my favorite teacher is Mr. Pinky, who teaches political science. He is very polite and explains questions clearly, which helps every student understand the subject better.

× Yes, there are many rules in my school which is followed by every student and such a rule as do not wear casual clothes at school because it affects the reputation of school if any student distract this rule.

✓ Yes, there are many rules in my school which are followed by every student, and such a rule is not to wear casual clothes at school because it affects the reputation of the school if any student breaks this rule.

The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are followed' instead of 'is followed'. Also, 'such a rule as do not wear casual clothes' is incorrect; it should be 'such a rule is not to wear casual clothes'. The verb 'distract' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'break' when referring to violating a rule. Additionally, 'reputation of school' needs the definite article 'the' before 'school'. These corrections ensure subject-verb agreement and proper verb usage.

× Yes, there are many benefits for student if every student follow the rules.

✓ Yes, there are many benefits for students if every student follows the rules.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to match 'benefits for students'. Also, 'every student' is singular, so the verb should be 'follows' instead of 'follow' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× The first and foremost benefit is that student make their good reputation in school and classroom.

✓ The first and foremost benefit is that students make their good reputation in school and classroom.

The subject 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'make'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper pluralization.

× Yes, I know my favorite teacher whose name is Pinky and he teach me political science, you know very well manner.

✓ Yes, I know my favorite teacher whose name is Pinky and he teaches me political science, you know, in a very good manner.

The verb 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'. Also, 'very well manner' is incorrect; it should be 'in a very good manner' to correctly express the idea.

× Also he explain the question briefly which is very good for every individual.

✓ Also, he explains the question briefly, which is very good for every individual.

The verb 'explain' should be 'explains' to agree with the third person singular subject 'he'. Adding commas improves sentence clarity.